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lucasgraciano
09-10-2003, 12:38 AM
Thank you for the feedback everyone!
Someone requested some color on my amazon girl. Let me know what ya think.

http://lucasgraciano.com/art/character-06b.jpg

SIGIL
09-10-2003, 01:28 AM
:buttrock: VERY nice man. I love it. :buttrock:

wedge
09-10-2003, 01:32 AM
i think you might wanna rethink the position of the face. it looks a bit awkward, like she's got a super long neck or something.

other than that, very nice work. good, dynamic pose. good proportions, good coloring.

Sky_DaBomB
09-10-2003, 02:02 AM
For a second I thought this is Disney's Tazaan :D

kariefury
09-10-2003, 02:49 AM
Hey I like your concept alot. The head's in the wrong spot though. I think it should be more to the right.

bumskee
09-10-2003, 02:49 AM
hey, really like it.
agree witht he comment about her neck. also her left arm is rather too skinny..her bum looks great though!
:beer:

Terro
09-10-2003, 05:19 AM
Neck? what neck all I can focus on is her rear. Marvalous:eek:

phoenix
09-10-2003, 08:04 AM
well done dude....very nice......u put life into the sketch

masterbird
09-10-2003, 09:32 AM
ya..i agree..
the head is not attach to the body..
looks wired..
but the color is ok..

Self-Designer
09-10-2003, 12:20 PM
Does her head connected to her breast? ;) yes, her neck...

And maybe add details unless u want to leave it ruff...

Anyway, nice dynamics! :thumbsup:

Philipstraub
09-10-2003, 01:08 PM
fresh and original...godd job

lucasgraciano
09-10-2003, 10:04 PM
SIGIL- Thank you!

wgeddes- I got a lot of the too long neck thing, so I adjusted it and replaced it. Thanks for the reply.

Sky_DaBomB- I'll take that as a compliment!

bumskee- Thank you for your reply. I adjusted her head, but I felt her arm was OK.

Terro- Thank you for the commnet, try to control yourself.

phoenix- Thanks for the reply and the "life" you see in it.

Artist 3D- I adjusted her neck. Thank you!

Philipstraub- I'm glad you like it! Thank you for responding.


Thanks again everyone!

lucasgraciano
09-10-2003, 10:06 PM
Thanks guys for replying. The image now is the new one and I've adjusted the head. Thanks again!

Self-Designer
09-10-2003, 10:10 PM
Dunno if u updated it in the forum, but it's way too far... I'm not sure we are able to see her face from that prespective - which makes it a bit a big problem....

Gena
09-11-2003, 08:08 PM
Nice! Im thinking movieposters from the 40-50ies. :thumbsup:

Sinkywinky
09-11-2003, 08:32 PM
The right hand looks rather wrong.

fizzgig
09-12-2003, 07:52 PM
nice colors. i miss the linework, though. you should maybe try a multiply layer of the lines

charlie brown
09-12-2003, 08:10 PM
yeah the heads off, but well rendered :beer:

hercanic
09-12-2003, 10:31 PM
Dear lucasgraciano:
A good start, but...how many fingers does her right hand have? I like the unique pose you've got her in. Her hands could benefit from some definition, though. Keep developing this, you're on the right track. Good luck!

jeroentje
09-13-2003, 08:32 AM
I merged your thread from the 2D wip forum into this thread.
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