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alaa-afifah
04-13-2010, 01:21 PM
Hi
First i want to thank my god for this.

and this is my personal character animation demo reel from 2007-2009 i hoe you like it
all your comment are welcome.
Software i used.
3dsmax&After Effect
you can watch it on vimeo.
http://www.vimeo.com/10816291

note:i am not study in animation mentor but i just re build the character inside_3dsmax
http://i650.photobucket.com/albums/uu230/alaa-afifah/mydemoreel.jpg

Imaver
04-13-2010, 02:06 PM
Very nice animation - I liked your reel!

Sapnay
04-13-2010, 02:57 PM
Great work :)

JoshKirk
04-13-2010, 05:29 PM
sweet man! good job!

kjnfqjibjbdhbdus
04-13-2010, 06:02 PM
Amazing animation man
تـم تصويت لك يا بطل
موفق باذن الله :cool:

nakimushi
04-13-2010, 07:21 PM
really really good reel man !!!
everything is really nice connected and rendering is clean for the eye

shalabology
04-13-2010, 08:40 PM
i smell it i feel it its around there the real talent the real power , thank u for amusing me and allowing me to watch that marvellious thing

trafamwa
04-13-2010, 10:52 PM
u r on the right path man keep going :arteest:

homer4lyfe
04-14-2010, 12:16 AM
Very nice. Lots of great subtlety to the animation with out losing the broader movements. I especially liked a lot of your work with the hands.

Splinter
04-14-2010, 01:09 AM
Awesome!!! I really enjoyed watching your reel. Thank you for sharing :beer:

tdjordan
04-14-2010, 03:54 AM
Your real was just fantastic man

RageOfAges
04-14-2010, 05:45 AM
Thank you for sharing this with us. I had one of those smiles on the whole time. You know, that smile you get when something unexpectedly pleasant comes your way and you think to yourself "This is just wonderful!".

-rage

alaa-afifah
04-14-2010, 07:58 PM
wow.
thanks for all of you guys and for your interesting about this.

maxspider3000
04-15-2010, 08:57 AM
as I told you man ... you are just doing great, so great masha Allah :)

just keep it up my dear ...

shalabology
04-16-2010, 08:47 AM
i think that deserves more attention , hey folks we have fantastic work here !

detached
04-16-2010, 07:11 PM
Agreed. This should be plugged. I love the energy and emotion that comes out in your characters. Theres something very unique about your work that brings them alive. Very nice.

nikiataa
04-16-2010, 08:35 PM
vary goooooooooooooooooooood that amazing motion go a head .

moroc
04-17-2010, 02:27 PM
nice work my friend
and good luck

alaa-afifah
04-19-2010, 01:56 PM
Hi thanks for all of you guys and for your support i really appreciate that.

shalabology
04-19-2010, 08:33 PM
there s no bias but its very unique work , again i am the yeller: come on everybody there s a unique piece of work , come and see and the matter then is up to you

AkinYaman
04-21-2010, 07:34 AM
wouuu so nice animation

Ecleposs
04-25-2010, 01:49 PM
Awesome job dude :) really great
as i told you b4 i really love ur sense of wight & timing
keep on doing that great stuff :)

ziggwies
04-26-2010, 01:07 AM
In general, I like your underlying locomotion, poses, acting choices, and moving hold. Something I think you can improve on are lip sync and facial expressions.

I think you could make this reel short. I particularly like the first and last piece. I would cut some pieces like the one at 1:48. I don't really feel the pull. Moreover, you already covered the "pull" in your first piece so this is just a weaker duplicate.

This is just what I think and I might be wrong. Nevertheless, it's entertaining to watch Alaa.

StephanePayette
04-26-2010, 04:06 AM
Great job!

IkerCLoN
04-26-2010, 11:44 AM
Nice animation there :-) But be careful when you decide to move the camera: you crossed the sight lines in several clips and this can be confusing for the audience.

alaa-afifah
04-29-2010, 08:26 AM
thanks for all of you and for give from your time.

alaa-afifah
04-29-2010, 08:36 AM
In general, I like your underlying locomotion, poses, acting choices, and moving hold. Something I think you can improve on are lip sync and facial expressions.

I think you could make this reel short. I particularly like the first and last piece. I would cut some pieces like the one at 1:48. I don't really feel the pull. Moreover, you already covered the "pull" in your first piece so this is just a weaker duplicate.

This is just what I think and I might be wrong. Nevertheless, it's entertaining to watch Alaa.

thank you man but in 1:48 i am not try to show the pull i try to show the weight

evika
04-29-2010, 09:42 AM
hello brother

Great skills in anim, great potential.

I agree with the cameras, some mistakes deserve the reel.

ziggwies
04-29-2010, 09:45 PM
thank you man but in 1:48 i am not try to show the pull i try to show the weight

Oh okay. By the way it was just a suggestion. Do what you feel like is the best Alaa.

FutureBon
04-30-2010, 10:21 AM
i think that deserves more attention , hey folks we have fantastic work here !

Seriously! Great clip choices & animation :-D I like the personality you achieved with the faces, and awesome movements.

nmcelmury
04-30-2010, 07:24 PM
Really nice reel man. I do agree your lip synch work is a little lacking compared to the rest, but still a marvelous job.
Honestly I thought the strongest part of your reel was your camera work, though , as said before, you may have broken a sight line or two, there was something very organic and real about it.
Really nice job!

bahaa-saleh
05-03-2010, 09:26 AM
Great Reel...Great animation...
Keep it up and Good luck in your next projects.

pskourie21
05-04-2010, 12:39 AM
Hey man nice work, your timing and weight are great for physical stuff.

I would work on your lipsync and dialogue stuff though, your actions seem to hit late on there marks for the lines he delivers and some of the poses arent always so clear, they all kind of float together so its kind of hard to see feel what your trying to portray for the character. Your lipsync for the mouth and expressions are also the same they seem to hit off beat. The mouth shapes need to hit before the phonim they are trying to portray.

Try some some simple change of emotion exercises working from the chest up, so your focusing more on the reactions on the face. Great body stuff, your definetly very talented at dealing with very physical movements.

Cheers

alaa-afifah
05-06-2010, 08:25 AM
Really nice reel man. I do agree your lip synch work is a little lacking compared to the rest, but still a marvelous job.
Honestly I thought the strongest part of your reel was your camera work, though , as said before, you may have broken a sight line or two, there was something very organic and real about it.
Really nice job!


thank you man and for your advice

alaa-afifah
05-06-2010, 08:26 AM
Great Reel...Great animation...
Keep it up and Good luck in your next projects.


thank you my friend

alaa-afifah
05-06-2010, 08:27 AM
Hey man nice work, your timing and weight are great for physical stuff.

I would work on your lipsync and dialogue stuff though, your actions seem to hit late on there marks for the lines he delivers and some of the poses arent always so clear, they all kind of float together so its kind of hard to see feel what your trying to portray for the character. Your lipsync for the mouth and expressions are also the same they seem to hit off beat. The mouth shapes need to hit before the phonim they are trying to portray.

Try some some simple change of emotion exercises working from the chest up, so your focusing more on the reactions on the face. Great body stuff, your definetly very talented at dealing with very physical movements.

Cheers



thank my man i really respect your advice.

thebest
05-07-2010, 05:34 PM
as the folks said before me you are definitely on the right path :beer: keep it up

alaa-afifah
05-12-2010, 06:57 AM
as the folks said before me you are definitely on the right path :beer: keep it up


thank you man and for pushing me up.

zecas
06-05-2010, 09:25 AM
very good animation

shalabology
06-05-2010, 01:35 PM
FutureBon (http://forums.cgsociety.org/member.php?u=420230) i m so sorry if my comment was annoying for u , i waas just excited about that animation work , i hope you accept my apology every one !
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balage
06-05-2010, 09:42 PM
Congratulations! Nice reel indeed!

alaa-afifah
07-08-2010, 10:47 AM
balage & shalabology & zecas
thanks you to much.

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