Virginie_Female_Head

[Xuan_Zang]

I think the head above the eyebrow line is too chunky from the front view.

In the side view the cheek looks slightly odd... from the way the side of the cheekbones reflect in the side view it looks like the cheeks should be sharper and slightly more forwards at the point, but instead they become too rounded and large like they belong to a fatter face. The bottom view looks like this too if you follow the outline down the left side.

I'd suggest slimming down the front of the cheeks a little and maybe sticking the cheekbones out a bit more at the front and maybe slim the side of the face a bit and make the top of the head more sleek

But don't read too much into my opinion though....it's already much better than my head model:)

[cybernaut]

Looking awesome!!!!!

C&C - From the front it looks almost perfect. About the only thing I can see in that view that could be changed are the eyes, they seem a little large (see adjusted attachments). From the front I noticed a few more things to consider. First, I would rotate your head so it's more vertical. It's bloody hard to build a 3D head realistically when it's at an obscure angle... unless you Michaelangelo :). Your head shape it quite accurate and proportions are spot on, mostly its little things that I noticed. What I noticed that: the eye shape itself stretches around the head a bit much, The bridge of the nose seems low-ish (I'm speaking generically), the nostril either needs to be move back or lengthened, the upper lip should be angled in at a slope instead of puffing out, and lastly the ear could be rotated slight more vertical. Thats about all I can see. Their all pretty minor things.

Keep up the great work :applause:

Front

http://www.cgtalk.com/image/cgtalk/VirgoFace2.jpg

[enoxa]

thanks for your replies : i'll work more on the eyes and the upper lips. For the cheeks i don't know : she was supposed to have a round face...

[wgreenlee1]

I think it looking dang good!!!
Keep with what you are doing.

[enoxa]

OK. I've changed the nose, a little bit the mouth, the eyes, cheeks.

So....

http://perso.wanadoo.fr/enoxa/VirgoFace1.jpg
http://perso.wanadoo.fr/enoxa/VirgoProfil1.jpg
http://perso.wanadoo.fr/enoxa/Virgo341.jpg

... what do you think about it?

Again thanks for your replies. It helps me a lot

enoxa

[enoxa]

and this one with some hair...

http://perso.wanadoo.fr/enoxa/VirgoHair1.jpg
http://perso.wanadoo.fr/enoxa/VirgoHair2.jpg

[enoxa]

no more comments ... :(

[p0lym0rph]

verry nice model,maybe the eyes look's one little strange

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