Animation: NONSENS...realy ;]

[CnexS]

the Girl:
if you look at her hair in the neck, i think its too clean and her hair ends at an too high point try to get some diffrent photos were you can se the womens hair. Also in the front
and you defenetly need more hair i can see right throu it and the hair needs to be smaller rightnow it looks like she got this giant hairstreaks
her body and walking looks really good to me just some minor problems when she bends down her arm her skin tend to go a little high under her shoulder "dont know the word in english but were you get swetty :D"

The spider:
i like the detail on it but maybe you should take a look at you walkingcycle... i think it should be more floating.. right now its like bumping foreward.. u need it more floating and creepy

environment and lightning:
i think the enviorment looks good.. you never have it in fokus but it seems to be really good textures on the walls and the floor, i think you should take a look at those red curtains what i could see on them was that they looked a little odd.
the lightning is maybe a little dark you are probobly looking for a dark environment i could see that it came lights from the windows make it just slightly lighter maybe you should add some particles in the air floating around but you should only be able to se thous particles in the light from the windows
well thats all for now :) keep up the work
// CnexS

[stinkyIKsniffer]

When she's running towards the spider during the sideview, her head bobs too much. They way you have it, suggests that every stride she's taking is a 5 foot drop towards the ground.


Also, when she lands in the opening scene, there seems to be an extra few bounces that her body does.



Finally, when she's in the spiders mouth and it's shaking her, she looks dead. There's no fight in her, as if she's allowing it to swing her back and forth.

That's all. Overall, it's a very nice clip. Good work.

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