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mikelima
09-08-2003, 09:41 PM
my first picture here. made with c4d r8 and ps 7....

http://www.mikelima.de/3d/schloss.jpg

weezle
09-08-2003, 09:44 PM
Beeeeeeeeautiful! The color captures the theme very well!

Sky_DaBomB
09-08-2003, 10:41 PM
Great work! I like the feeling of this image...
One thing though, The lighting on the sky makes me wonder like what time is it? It looks like it's getting dark but I could see some light on the left hand side.....just my 2 cent.

kaktuswasser
09-08-2003, 11:36 PM
very nice one :beer:

themonke
09-09-2003, 03:49 AM
sweet, that is excellent

STRAT
09-09-2003, 08:32 AM
is that dirty nutz i can see? if it is then up the samples. also theres a fair few AA issues to deal with.

cracking shot tho :)

wgreenlee1
09-09-2003, 08:35 AM
Awesome stuff....maybe just a little less ambience but a great work!

rollmops
09-09-2003, 08:35 AM
Great environment!
I real dig that atmosphere!
Just one improvement in texture: the scale of the stones on the towers is a little too big. You've got it so good on the building on the left side!
Bleu could be given by the color of light in place of the stone shading!
Keep it up! :thumbsup:

diazgl
09-09-2003, 09:34 AM
I'll go with rollmops on that one. The stones look a bit big. Also, since you used some lighting on the left, I would assume that it's almost dawn. Maybe use some warm colour from the left? Up to you! Also, try to work on the stars above. They look very simple and too few. Try a lot of points with different intensity each and some glow. You can make your sky a lot more interesting! Some of your shadows look too hard, maybe smooth them up? A sitting bird here and there would add some life to the scene (or death...:) The mountain behind the castle looks too barren..?

And last, there seem to be a lot of cg edges in your scene and a lot of cg smooths. Like, the castle; i think you smoothed up some edges of the building but you didn't crack them up.

That's it!
Great job though.

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