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eirenicon
09-07-2003, 04:43 AM
This character is loosely based on the assassin Jon Amraphel from Errant Story (http://www.errantstory.com/), written and illustrated by Michael Poe. I say loosely because I took my own artistic liberties with him, but you can see the original character here (http://www.errantstory.com/gallery25.html). Or just read Errant Story, it's excellent stuff.

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http://www3.sympatico.ca/tim.duyzer/host/artwork/assassin-jon-final-small.jpg (http://www3.sympatico.ca/tim.duyzer/host/artwork/assassin-jon-final-large.jpg)

3ds max 4 and Photoshop 6.
Sky_DaBomB
09-07-2003, 04:50 AM
Great work!!! :applause:
Sorry I cant really give you any specific crit but there's something about the pose of your character that bothers me.
eirenicon
09-07-2003, 04:52 AM
It's a little dark but it might help to know that his arms are mostly covered with a cloak. They do look a little off still, but I'm finished with this piece, I think. I've spent enough time on it already :D

Thanks.
HenningK
09-07-2003, 04:54 AM
Errg. His eyes. Make them bigger and less sucked-in to his skull. It took me a minute to notice it but, the rest of the body seems ill-proportioned too. Why are his arms so pencil-thin? Textures and lighting =really good though.
love,hen
eirenicon
09-07-2003, 05:31 AM
http://www3.sympatico.ca/tim.duyzer/host/artwork/assassin-jon-final-wirefram.jpg
sixthe45
09-07-2003, 05:46 AM
His hands seem smaller.Were the hands supposed to be posed that way it looks kind of unproportional(placement).
gunslingerblack
09-07-2003, 05:54 AM
hey man it's got alot of potential but as it is right now there arms hands are too small they look like he's got a skeleton arms and hands holding revolvers , also his forehead is way too big he looks kinda like cromagnon man with skeleton arms. i dont mean to be mean im just telling you what ive noticed. keep up the good work and if u decide to update it sho us the new version
DarkHydra
09-07-2003, 06:54 AM
His forearms look kinda sticklike too. And I personally feel that hit head sticks forward too much as well. It's a good start though. Perhaps a more weathered face texture might add something.

PS: His eyes look really small.
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