WIP: Girl Character (Gisele)

[ilka]

Maan thats lovely but the belly button looks a bit dodgy

[Hollis J Wood]

looks great but I do agree the button needs a bit of a pucker I think

[Tekspdy]

from the knee to her waist seems to short... might wanna make her taller ;)

Does look a bit odd if you think about it with that in mind.

But hell, who knows, my perception of womens legs might be poor, lol.

[godeus25]

yeah, there is something wierd about the knees. the are set to far in, away from the outside of the body. they should be in a bit, but that looks a bit much. belly button caught my eye right away. foxy though!

[Dennispls]

looks very nice!!:buttrock:

[Ganimed]

Very nice,

except what ilka and Hollis said.

greetings


Ganimed

[WanielJorge]

:buttrock: Physical aspect of the body very different from the style Brazilian, very convincing and a lot of charm, only the big hands, I see me that it deserves cares, good work. Congratulations.:wip: :applause:

[cybernaut]

Absolutely Amazing work!!! :applause: :applause: :applause:

I would have to say that her proportions are very accurate for a typical woman. I can't believe that I'm going to say this but you probably could safely make her slightly taller; although, it's not necessary so only if you wanted too :)

I agree with the comments about the belly button, some tweaking is still need, but talk about a minor problem? One thing that popped out for me was her wrists, particularly the way her hands join to her wrists. It appears like they're almost broken. Perhaps bringing the wrist joint a bit further down the arm would help. JAT IMHO

Cheers

BTW what "specifically" did you use for reference?

[3d42dustin]

... first of all to those who said there are problems with her legs being too short... get ur porportion right before u critique :)

shes wearing LOW LOW cut paints/suit. WAIST starts at belly button OK! not where the pants are. THERE IS no problem with the legs set in to far, and the thighs ARE NOT too SHORT! because she is STANDING on an angle. wIth her hip up and her WEIGHT on one feet.

Pls pay attention to her posing, it is done really well. THe legs are done exactly to reference NICE!! they are not set in to far.keep up the good wo rk yoojin, just need to make the belly button sexier :)
comparing a skeleton of a woman to a man, Womens legs are sit IN on a stronger angle then a man. The knees are almost on a slant fron a front view, you did a good job with that yoojin :) no fixing required there!

And the girl is the right height! PERFECT! :buttrock:

[3d42yoojin]

:blush:
thanks for replies, guys..
the balley button needs to fix for sure..i agree....
i'm gonna reenvelopeing and weighting later..now i'm doing my set..
i hope you see my close up shot which i added today as well..

:)

[hackie]

that's sweet Model!!

i've been seen your model since the begining of the last month.
your progress has been amazing!!
sweet work!!
i cant wait to see your comleted model.
so if you finish your model plz let me know
i'm looking forward to seeing it.

cool

ji:applause: :applause: :applause:

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