character: mavis

[PsychoSilence]

she´s nice ! like her eyes alot !
well done !

[tonfarben]

Thanks man!
to others who view: although I don´t work more on her, comments and crits are as always very welcome!:)

[Zion]

Good job. But.....aren't those Squidinc's eyes? I asume they're not since you didn't mention it after PS complimented them.

If so :shame:

Otherwise well done

[tonfarben]

Oh, I´m sorry. The eyeshader truly isn´t mine. It´s downloaded from this Thread:
http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?s=&threadid=54417

But I slightly retouched the shaders (added Chanlum and reflections, differed highlights and colours). I didn´t know that I have to mention the use of these eyes cuz they are downloadable for all and this is a private project. So, once again, sorry for that.

I was requested in another forum to make brighter hair, so here it is:
Also again retouched eyeshader (brighter colors)

[phoenix]

well done job..:thumbsup:

[squidinc]

Originally posted by tonfarben
Oh, I´m sorry. The eyeshader truly isn´t mine. It´s downloaded from this Thread:
http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?s=&threadid=54417

But I slightly retouched the shaders (added Chanlum and reflections, differed highlights and colours). I didn´t know that I have to mention the use of these eyes cuz they are downloadable for all and this is a private project. So, once again, sorry for that.

I was requested in another forum to make brighter hair, so here it is:
Also again retouched eyeshader (brighter colors)

you don't have to mention where you got them, I gave them away for anyone to use, they're only shaders after all, it's nice to see them used though :)

I like the image too, perhaps a bit much noise on the image though, could you post a clearer render? :)

[proudclod]

wow!! i really like it, she sorta reminds me of tifa...who is very hot mite i mention!!!1 crit tho, on the left, i noticed that her face looks kinda manly....

[tonfarben]

Thanx for the replies guys!
@squidinc: Thank you for the shaders! I really like them. But if you turn reflection on in the iris they are even better! I postet a better version of the pic already. There she has better hair(not so black) and better eyes. It´s the attachment of the post of mine you quoted.

@proudclod: Maybe the cameraangle is bad on that shot, I don´t think she is manly. I´m curious cuz I modelled her from a very girlish referencepic. This one http://www.fineart.sk/Nfront.jpg and the corresponding sideshot.

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