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animfreak
03-17-2010, 05:56 AM
Hi I am Newbee...
I have just made this reel. Please give me some comments, tips anything you like to say...
I want to improve my work. People just visit the pages , and don't comment. Please
dont do this. Comment and give me tips to improve the work. Here is the link to my work
Thank you...

http://vimeo.com/9486702 (http://vimeo.com/9486702)
(http://vimeo.com/9486702%20) (http://forums.cgsociety.org/) (http://vimeo.com/9486702)

EricDLegare
03-17-2010, 03:40 PM
It think that showing that your rigs are "scale friendly" by scaling them in the demo was a good idea :applause:

besides that your turntable's pivot point is off, if you look at the base, it's moving, it should stay stable has it should pivot from it's center. :cry:

keep up the good work !

homer4lyfe
03-17-2010, 07:19 PM
Your Rigging appears to be your strongest discipline. Character models could use some work. They don't quite have that pure organic feel. They seem blocky and rigid in places. Hands need the most work. Fingers are too thin and hands are too small. Pivot being off on the turntables is very distracting. If you are going to show a hard surface model (the crane) as your first model it should blow the viewer away, lots of detail lots of good shaders and lighting. Show some close-ups, its a big object. Don't make it seem small and unimportant by showing it from a high camera angle far away.

AmbroseMcduffy
03-17-2010, 10:44 PM
I think u should focus on your rigging and man it's not bad at all, you should maybe purchase a few gnomon dvd's pertaining to rigging.

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