WIP-Woman head

[psyc3d]

Here is the body to go with the head WARNING Nudity as no clothed are completed yet.

http://members.shaw.ca/psyc3d/gallery_images/bodyfinal.jpg

Critiques are requested and welcome thanks.

[ReSeT]

Hi!

First of all: I'm from germany and my english human body related is very very bad, but I'll try my best to describe what I think.

The top part of the skull seems to tall and to deep.

The breast are to stick together and also the bone to the shoulders. (In german it's called "Schlüsselbein").

Below I marked the points that seem wrong to me. Hope that helps. With your face (very nice) and the rest of the body I'm fine.

http://www.pm-edv.com/images/bodyfinal_edit.jpg

http://www.pm-edv.com/images/facefinal_edit.jpg


GreetZ

Dane

[psyc3d]

thanks for the critique I didnt explain when I posted the Breasts are pulled in because i modelled the body to have a tight fitting shirt on so I pulled them in like they would be wearing the shirt.

I have made the changes to the head already I will post them later today.

THe back and collar bone area I will rework today based on your advice and repost later today also.

Thanks again.

[Jb5k1]

the feet look like they dont have toes (not a good view), but i figured if u were putting a shirt on, that you would probably fully dress her

but i would reccommend creating toes for the feet, just in case u want a pic of her laying in the grass with no shoes or something, otherwise, its awesome, and will be even better with the corrections to the head and what not

good luck

[psyc3d]

thanks for the input on the feet thats the next part I was goign to tackle.

She will be wearing shoes is most shots but toes are definately in the works.

Thanks

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