WIP - outdoor scene

[SammyB]

Okay, the thing that really stands out to me is the how absolutely fake the grafitti looks. Firstly, It's way outta scale, it's like 3 times bigger then a person could reach. Secondly, the walls are two different colours, whats the deal with that? And the graf, especially on the white wall, is cut off before it ends and this just doesn't happen in real life.

The green texture on the chairs needs to be dirtier and needs more variation, it's too green in my opinion. The lighting needs a bit of work, eg. The underside of the umbrella looks almost black...Maybe you should go for a night time approach rather then daytime, as I think this would be more appropriate for the setting, but thats just my opinion. Keep working on it. :thumbsup:

[EvilBlah]

thxs for the crits... i see exactly what you mean with the graffiti and i will work on the lighting. do you have any recommendations for a nice lighting setups...

-bair

[ZIVrender]

Awsome:thumbsup:

[derrick]

looks great but the graf is looking very squished.

[scrimski]

The cans look kinda artifical, cast no shadows. The shadow of thie barrier thing looks strange, the chairs could use some smoothing the texturing of the umbrellas looks strange

[kevp]

why is the barrier even there compositionally speaking? Why would a barrier be that close to an exterior seating area logically speaking?

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