Object/sony-ericsson t68i

[ToddD]

Hi! :) It looks pretty good, although there are a couple of things you may want to work on in the future. As far as modleing, the buttons look like they are just placed there, they need to insert into some sort of opening. Only other thing I can see that needs a little work are the ground texture, and the lighting. Good job, I did a phone about a week ago, here's the link to the WIP. Have to make time to finish it, but you get the idea!
http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?s=&threadid=84393
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[jdj]

Hello happyto3d

Nice rendering!

I agree that the buttons definitely need some holes to go down in - perhaps also a tiny bevel on the hole edges is required to get the look just right.

Also the 2, 5, 8 & 0 buttons are further and further into the phone.

Then you have some horrid little aliasing / texture ting going in the bottom left corner of the phone, a jagged line.

Apart from that I think it is a great image.

And now for the cheating section - I happen to have just that phone in just that color :) (you too?):

It is a great picture as it is, so take this as pointers if you want to make the picture even more like the real thing. I wouldn't have thought of them unless I really had the phone to compare with.

*picking up my phone*

- I think that the display looks a bit flat. Perhaps if you made it a transparent surface and created a simple flat surface below with the logo it would do the trick? It is also a square screen with black edges to fill the gap to the rounded borders.

- My buttons are also a little different from the material of the phone. They are more metallic/chrome in appearance.

- The blue face-plate has a pearl structure, i.e. small white sparkling dots scattered around.

- The sides, about at the height of the display - are more bulging / rounded. Also the face-plate does not exceed over the edge as it looks like its doing next to the NO button, but this is perhaps fixed if a little more bulge is applied to the sides?

- I have two LEDs at the top (one on each end) which are larger and cuts away from the faceplate even more.

- The SonyEricsson logo on the face-plate has the wrong font, You have the correct one on the display - steal it ;)


Anyway - great picture!

Cheers!
/ Daniel
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[graffb]

Hm.. Not precise!

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