acting exercise

[Taoizm]

Freaking brilliant. :applause: The acting was very well done, and the entire piece was a hoot to watch. the lip synch seemed a little sluggish, but the motion more than made up for it.

[Raji]

dude that was great! What got me laughing at first was very simply the idea and how it was staged. I was laughing pretty hard over here!! lol. Good job!

I will say that the animation could have used some work. Throughout the short, I noticed a lot of spots where the character lacked movement. The character would just stay still for a second or two between poses. You need to keep the character moving. I'll also agree that the lip-synching could use more work too.

Anyway, great job. I didn't notice much of this stuff (except the lip-synching) until I watched it the second time! That's always a good sign!! :thumbsup:

Raji

[Raji]

dude that was great! What got me laughing at first was very simply the idea and how it was staged. I was laughing pretty hard over here!! lol. Good job!

I will say that the animation could have used some work. Throughout the short, I noticed a lot of spots where the character lacked movement. The character would just stay still for a second or two between poses. You need to keep the character moving. I'll also agree that the lip-synching could use more work too.

Anyway, great job. I didn't notice much of this stuff (except the lip-synching) until I watched it the second time! That's always a good sign!! :thumbsup:

Raji

[3dflasher]

good god that is some funny stuff. I loved the animation. really good timing and you managed to portray the emotion of the sound clip...very good work.:thumbsup:

[edaddy]

everything definitely seems to be synced up well - the character is animated brilliantly, from the feet stomping to the arm movements, EVERYTHING is animated w/ emotion -- excellent work -- sorry i can't give any crits .....;)

[dzogchen]

I love the animation, the subtle facial and eyes expression when he is timid is just so adorable! Wonderful work. I love your Road Kill series - Pigs too.:buttrock: :thumbsup:

[yuval_nathan]

thanks to all of you, who replyed.
its grate to get critiques after a long work without the posibility to see the animation in fresh first view. you just lose pespective and objectivety.
about the lacke of movemnt is few spots. you have a point. i tryed to create a kind of a shockd character that dont move alot at the begining, but still its true that even when a charcter freezes it have some small movements.
thanks again
yuval

[shaul]

great animation, yuval,
i did not know you have good animators in israel, i wonder where you are hiding all these years?
what are you doing right now?
we are looking for character animators here in london, not a big project, but lots of fun.
any way, great job!
:bounce:

[sherban]

:thumbsup:
really funny
good use of the original sound in the new context.

:thumbsdow
Facial Expressions.
His face doesn't seem to carry the emotion. Especially when he's shouting. Try covering his mouth during the animation. You'll see what I mean.

[marbuv]

:beer: cheers for that movie.
very aqurate acting, keep on this way!

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