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mazzaloth 09-01-2003, 03:14 PM <when a machine fell in love>.
(painter 7, 20 hours+)
c+c please, thank you.
http://emu.joyie.com/host/mazz/painting/69_machinlove.jpg
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mazzaloth
09-01-2003, 03:16 PM
some part of this work
(oh my poor English:blush: )
http://emu.joyie.com/host/mazz/painting/69_machinlove_s1.jpg
http://emu.joyie.com/host/mazz/painting/69_machinlove_s2.jpg
http://emu.joyie.com/host/mazz/painting/69_machinlove_s3.jpg
no comments? i think its nice and creative :) :thumbsup:
DEVARSHY
09-01-2003, 11:29 PM
i THINK tHE tITLE COULD Be grammatically corrected...
It should be "When a machine falls in love" or when a machine fell in love"
Other than that....some reflected light on the fingers would provide some more contrast and make the hand stand out a little more...right now,I feel It seems to get lost in the darkness.
Jus my 2Cents.
Its a very cstrong Concept with a unique approach.
Tim Deneau
09-02-2003, 01:18 AM
Visually it looks interesting, I don't really understand the message though :shrug:
mazzaloth
09-02-2003, 03:15 AM
thank you DEVARSHY :lightbulb
Originally posted by DEVARSHY
i THINK tHE tITLE COULD Be grammatically corrected...
It should be "When a machine falls in love" or when a machine fell in love"
Other than that....some reflected light on the fingers would provide some more contrast and make the hand stand out a little more...right now,I feel It seems to get lost in the darkness.
Jus my 2Cents.
Its a very cstrong Concept with a unique approach.
jumpjump999
09-02-2003, 06:11 AM
mazz,,,,,,i like u....r....pic.....
robcamp
09-02-2003, 06:53 AM
Good concept, saddening also.
I would say a bit too dark in some areas, and I agree on the need of some incidental light on the edges of the arm and maybe the toilet to bring some details up.
Nice!
xgrave
09-02-2003, 07:45 AM
good work,I like that toilet:beer:
dirtyiron
09-02-2003, 08:34 AM
Pain of Love ? Maybe I don't know what you want to express,but your work is really amazing~~~~~~~I love it!! :thumbsup:
mazzaloth
09-03-2003, 05:34 AM
I was surprised and honored so much to get advice from you. I found that the drawing looks much better than before as a whole after I retouched it according to your advice. Thank you very much. :beer:
Originally posted by robcamp
Good concept, saddening also.
I would say a bit too dark in some areas, and I agree on the need of some incidental light on the edges of the arm and maybe the toilet to bring some details up.
Nice!
Vesuvando
09-03-2003, 05:44 AM
Nice picture , even if the plot of the image is not clear for me...
Maybe you can explain?
damnengineer
09-03-2003, 05:47 AM
I love it, I guess the robot went down the drain
mazzaloth
09-03-2003, 06:04 AM
that comes from a dream of mine. a robot falls in love with a human being, then ... eventually ... but I just couldn't remember all about it, so I had to record it by drawing with my imagination. thank you for your concerning. :)
Originally posted by Vesuvando
Nice picture , even if the plot of the image is not clear for me...
Maybe you can explain?
bluestone
09-03-2003, 06:53 AM
:buttrock: :beer::applause:good work!~ it better then my,i just to learn painter8 a few time ago,(sorry my english very limited.T_T)
http://210.51.181.218/ut/attach/2003/09/02/1594694-girl-embed.jpg
phoenix
09-10-2003, 08:02 PM
nice mood ......
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