Still Life: Coke Can in the street

[bigB]

the texture is to clean, add some dirt and rust to it...
and the top of the can looks weird.

[openzight]

I really love coke, thank god for coca cola...

:beer:

[BiowaX]

agree with bigB. Needs alittle more dust and dirt, the top of the can looks like its floating under water. Otherwise i think its pretty good :thumbsup:

[JimLad]

I think the end of the can (the surface with the ring pull etc) is too deformed. This part of a tin can is actually really quite strong and wouldn't have got bent as it has in the picture. Apart from that it looks very good indeed - I dont think the texture is too clean either, you dont need to add dirt to it.

[Twrch]

I agree with the other comments, except that aluminum does not rust. Well, it does rust, but aluminum oxide produces a tranclucent barier over the aluminum prohibiting it from rusting more than a very thin layer.
Also, it appears that the paint on the can has a thickness to it. I just looked at some soda cans and the paint layer is so thin it's indistinguisble to the naked eye.
Just my two cents.

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