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hunch
08-31-2003, 09:17 PM
i just did my first animation so i know its not very good at all, i just wanted abit of feedback :rolleyes:
thx

http://galileo.spaceports.com/~hunch/matrix%20shockwave.mpg

for some reason when i save something i cant reopen it later so i cant edit this, but im trying to work on some other stuff
AidanGibbons
08-31-2003, 09:55 PM
Not bad for a frst animation, not bad at all. Read the 12 principles of animation on cgnetworks.com however, to get a fantastic animation. You're lacking stretch and anticipation and a few other principles...when he's taking off, he just floats up.
mehdianim
09-01-2003, 04:31 AM
yeah i agree you need to make your timing a bit more snappy.
And the poses could be a bit more extreme.
But it's not bad at all for a first just needs some sweetening.
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