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seb4d
08-31-2003, 08:11 PM
hi,
here is a preview of an animation I'm currently working on.
I still have to enhance the movements, and then add fingers and face animation.

Feel free to comment and critique on it because it will help me a lot to improve my skills.

video 1.7Mb (http://perso.club-internet.fr/sebastien.gaucher/divers/toony_capture01.avi)

runejw
08-31-2003, 11:05 PM
Good start,
will probably work as a cartoon type animation.

Arrival and landing OK, but then he's moving his head around a lot, too much?... maybe it would help if he seemed to have some kind of purpose to the nodding, like green/red lights illuminating his face from instruments?

And the ending, what exactly is he jumping at, and why does he fall flat on his face ?

So I think a bit of visual explanation is needed to bring the point home to the viewer...

BTW the ear-movements were nice...


Cheers,
Rune

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