Environment: DEEP

[skyeywei]

hope you like it !

http://page.hxsd.com.cn/images/upload/2005/01/05/37943075.jpg

http://page.hxsd.com.cn/images/upload/2005/01/05/59873366.jpg

http://page.hxsd.com.cn/images/upload/2005/01/05/31682124.jpg

[bigbad]

You did very nice details but why doesnt it look like its under water. It has no density. Add som water dust. Small particels that flows around. Anything that ads density.

[sjaak]

i agree on that...
maybe make the bubbles more apparant (i only saw them in the alpha channel? (she just seems to float in space or something)
It also seems there's noting between the water and the face of the women (glass or someting)
I like the pruple thingy's =)

[wgreenlee1]

A little cartoonish but it still looks fabulous!
I like it!:thumbsup:

[Magius]

"hope you like it" ?? dude! are you serious ?? I LOVE IT!

[skyeywei]

T-27 modeling:

http://page.hxsd.com.cn/images/upload/2004/05/08/54664449.jpg

http://page.hxsd.com.cn/images/upload/2004/05/08/15298544.jpg

[jamesjhunt]

nice!

how did you get the nice glow on the falling "bulbs"?

[jeremybirn]

Looks really nice. It could be even better if that light on her forehead had a more organic, rounded glow around it instead of crisp streaks, lit up the murk and bubbles and water, and if it brightened an area of the floor and plants in front of her. The focus seems a little perfect, too, perhaps you could blur or ripple the more distant edges, and also have a shift to lower saturation in the background - popping saturated purple is great in the foreground, you just want to ease up on the color as you got further into the deep. Overall a really great image!

-jeremy

[nineinchneil]

the girl looks really stiff. for some reason she doesn't look like she's diving/wading. her hands need to bend at the wrist to show some sort of natural movement, because if you think about it, it's not too often that both your hands are completely parallel to your forearm when you move them.
i also think that you could have more purple light bouncing off of her from those little purple bulbs. i also agree with what jeremybirn said. you're closing in on a great image. don't give up.

[skyeywei]

modeling & wire

http://page.hxsd.com.cn/images/upload/2004/05/08/17499549.jpg

http://page.hxsd.com.cn/images/upload/2004/05/08/22460044.jpg

http://page.hxsd.com.cn/images/upload/2004/05/08/32478535.jpg

http://page.hxsd.com.cn/images/upload/2004/05/08/27339266.jpg

[skyeywei]

modeling & wire 2

http://61.187.55.84/ut/attach/2003/09/01/1587206-TD750-M7-embed.jpg

http://61.187.55.84/ut/attach/2003/09/01/1587209-TD750-M8-embed.jpg

http://61.187.55.84/ut/attach/2003/09/01/1587211-TD750-M9-embed.jpg

[skyeywei]

modeling girl

http://page.hxsd.com.cn/images/upload/2004/05/08/62732032.jpg



http://page.hxsd.com.cn/images/upload/2004/05/08/46017254.jpg

[skyeywei]

shuck

http://61.187.55.84/ut/attach/2003/09/01/1587230-X4E3-embed.JPG


http://61.187.55.84/ut/attach/2003/09/01/1587234-X4E7-embed.JPG

[skyeywei]

Originally posted by jeremybirn
Looks really nice. It could be even better if that light on her forehead had a more organic, rounded glow around it instead of crisp streaks, lit up the murk and bubbles and water, and if it brightened an area of the floor and plants in front of her. The focus seems a little perfect, too, perhaps you could blur or ripple the more distant edges, and also have a shift to lower saturation in the background - popping saturated purple is great in the foreground, you just want to ease up on the color as you got further into the deep. Overall a really great image!

-jeremy



thanks Jeremy ! good idea. I'll improve on this scene.

[skyeywei]

Originally posted by nineinchneil
the girl looks really stiff. for some reason she doesn't look like she's diving/wading. her hands need to bend at the wrist to show some sort of natural movement, because if you think about it, it's not too often that both your hands are completely parallel to your forearm when you move them.
i also think that you could have more purple light bouncing off of her from those little purple bulbs. i also agree with what jeremybirn said. you're closing in on a great image. don't give up.



thank your idea!

[skyeywei]

http://61.187.55.84/ut/attach/2003/08/26/1558587-1558587-X4C6a-embed_2.jpg

[asylum24]

awsome

[Kel Solaar]

Impressive work! but the first render lack of depth, and you have a lot of detail wich isn't visible because of lightning issue, a little more work and you will have a very beautifull picture.

[amos_chid]

amazing work :buttrock:
I think the last one is the best :applause:

[H-L]

thanks for all ideas,we will do it better next time!:)

[skyeywei]

thanks all friend !

can't stop dream up !:)

[Loren]

:beer: ¼ÓÓÍ!!!

by our best to do work!!!

[skyeywei]

Originally posted by L&D
:beer: ¼ÓÓÍ!!!

by our best to do work!!!


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[mage111]

your last picture captures alot more with the close up of the girl, and the changes you made since the second last one greatly improve apoun the image, very well done :-)

[skyeywei]

hi mage111 , thank your idea !





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[skyeywei]

up ! up ! up ! : )

[skyeywei]

robot moding :



http://www.chinavfx.com/bbs/attachments/200309/11184720-TD750-f1.jpg

http://www.chinavfx.com/bbs/attachments/200309/11185004-TD750-f2.jpg

http://www.chinavfx.com/bbs/attachments/200309/11185121-TD750-f3.jpg

http://www.chinavfx.com/bbs/attachments/200309/11185239-TD750-f4.jpg

[dickma]

That's easy for the depth problem...

Why there is not enough depth because the colors are too primary.....
add a dull-blue color solid layer on the top of the image in photoshop.

I prefer more seeweeds at the seabed.....

[skyeywei]

Originally posted by Dick Ma
That's easy for the depth problem...

Why there is not enough depth because the colors are too primary.....
add a dull-blue color solid layer on the top of the image in photoshop.

I prefer more seeweeds at the seabed.....




thank your idea!
:)

[Pent]

very clean, well done
I do agree with the density comment...though

[skyeywei]

thanks :) up !

[skyeywei]

lighting DEMO-ut :)

http://61.187.55.84/ut/attach/2003/09/19/1681297-X7-embed.jpg

[skyeywei]

link rework on the front image !

improve version: "deep life"
welcome comment ! :)

[skyeywei]

http://www.chinanim.com/bbs/UploadFile/200411321183633081.jpg

http://www.chinanim.com/bbs/UploadFile/200411321213744205.jpg

[teruchan]

I see "improve version" on there so I guess I missed an earlier one. It looks plenty undereater to me.. but WHY does it take so long to load?

Also is that avatar a Parasite Eve character?

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[mikepolizos]

So you finished it!

Great image as always!

:buttrock: :buttrock: :buttrock:

[skyeywei]

Originally posted by mikepol |3D|
So you finished it!

Great image as always!

:buttrock: :buttrock: :buttrock:

thank you ! :beer:

[chongzi]

:eek: woooooooooow!
Really wonderful work!:thumbsup:

[skyeywei]

Originally posted by chongzi
:eek: woooooooooow!
Really wonderful work!:thumbsup:


chongzi : thanks !
:beer:

[r3studios]

more thatn the half of the pictures don´t work. :hmm:

[miao3d]

l like the Modelling! :applause:

the light in scene kann be ameliorated

强力支�国人作��
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[skyeywei]

Originally posted by miao3d
l like the Modelling! :applause:

the light in scene kann be ameliorated

强力支�国人作��
:beer:

miao3d: 谢谢支持　:)
chinese :beer:

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