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jbuchwitz
08-30-2003, 07:17 PM
Hey everyone,

I would love comments / crits on this guy. Thanks.

Jason
Portfolio (http://www3.telus.net/buchwitz/portfolio)

http://www3.telus.net/buchwitz/tt/knightB.jpg

brandish
08-30-2003, 08:18 PM
man, this guy looks cool! i like this style!
Thy drawing shows two mistakes, though. the axe "kisses" the armor, it should overlap, to give a better feeling of
3dimensionality, and secondly the axe is not in the right perspective, it looks bent!

jbuchwitz
08-30-2003, 08:58 PM
brandish,

Great comments/crits. Looking at it in light of your crits, I can totally agree with you. This is exactly the feedback I need to sharpen my skills. Thanks a ton!


Jason

keep the com/crits coming...

napalm
08-31-2003, 03:03 AM
Great job on the details and the shading. But I found the proportions and the perspective weird. Perhaps it s a choice for the character's proportion (deformed) but you should try another perspective for the arms.

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