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Zuria
08-29-2003, 06:41 PM
Hi
I made a littel piece to practice.
I'm waiting yours critiquice
http://www.beitu3d.euskalnet.net/toma_farsa.mov
Endika

lala7
08-29-2003, 06:59 PM
rofl ... wt* ??? hehehe :hmm: well i enjoyed it for sure..
i was already anoyed with that left guys attitude..
good thing that happend to him.. :surprised
also have audio version ??? i kinda missed that...
grz lala

mehdianim
08-30-2003, 10:42 AM
the gag doesn't really work cuz we've seen it in Monster's inc. If you're going to copy a gag, it should be better thant the original or have a good twist.
The comedic timing on the whole thing is not too good because the characters are too small to get a good look at them before the punch line so that ruins the joke as well.
And finally the guy's fall has a pop, which draws attention away form the gag and onto your animation skill.
I'd say give them a more humoristic entrance to begin with...with a shot tighter on the bodies where their attitudes are clear. And the gag should somehow be more constructed. That's for you to think about.
But it is a good practice for sure, i think you got it.

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