Dialog Animation

[Nightkrawler xo]

That was nice.

[mehdianim]

Hey I enjoyed watching the animation but I have no idea what is going on.
When you take an audio clip out of context make sure it is either easy to grasp without its context, or recreate the context for us as succinctly as you can.
Also doesn't help that most of the words are mumbled and not intelligible.

Seems like a lot of criticism but like I said it's mainly about your choice of subject and how you understand it. The animation is pretty good, keep it up !

[alaa-afifah]

Nightkrawler thank you.


mehdianim thank for your critici.

[kjnfqjibjbdhbdus]

Nice Animation Work
:applause:
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ربنا يوفقك
اخوك وسيم من المنابر

[ivanisavich]

Well, the animation is good for the most part but the cinematography needs a LOT of work. Right now the whole thing is extremely confusing. You're constantly breaking the 180 rule, and completely disorienting the viewer. I had no idea the scene geography, where people were standing, who they were facing and what was going on the whole time. Also, the sound clip you chose involves a lot of mumbling so it's hard to understand what they're saying.

I like the idea behind the editing, ie: lots of quick cuts to keep the pace of a crazy person jumping around with a knife...but you don't want to over-do it.

[NShiotelis]

The camera movement was sometimes a little too chaotic for my liking and made it somewhat hard to to focus. I think you definitely captured the overall feeling you were trying to convey. There were a few times where I noticed the animation and the audio were out of sync. Overall the animation was great. :)

[alaa-afifah]

thank you wasssim..

Tyson Ibele:
thank for your critic its mean a lot and you are right withe what you say next time i will try to avoid this problem
but for I had no idea the scene geography, where people were standing .
i think its clean.
Tyson your critics will improve me thanks.

NShiotelis (http://forums.cgsociety.org/member.php?u=410361).
thank you very much

[funnyfunny]

fantasticooooooo

i am still learning animation and you are my idle

[funnyfunny]

sorrey for my bad english
want sayمثلي الاعلى :thumbsup:

[yamanmax]

nice work man

[eldany]

You are a great animator :)
Anyway...copy/paste Tyson's words.

[naza0222]

Excellent work guys!;)

[bahaa-saleh]

Now that you let them now about your first move this is not mean the end of the world,
so before posting in this wonderful web site you should to understand the secret posting rules., that this forum contain a very two importing things, the first one is the cg members
like you try to do the best to get what they want and what you do is watching their moves
and there were are your first mistake because you must understand that there another very importing things you should to now and this is the second thing (The forum leaders...With my all respects to them...:bowdown: ) they control everything in the forums even your head and my head by posting They rules using the unconscious, then you following it by trying to make works by watching the other cg members works.
right their the leaders have the knowing, and they rise their Conditions to get more and more to enhance this web site and that what i love it in this Wonderful web site.
so now that you know this rules it's not a very big problem to make them know about some of your parts because your core is still running.and i know that you have a great power and energy and now that you have the knowing i thing your next post will take the award.
maybe this right and maybe this wrong...or it's a bigger.
the choice is yours.
amazing animation bat for the other parts you know now what to do.
good Luke my friend.:thumbsup:

[bahaa-saleh]

I forget to tell you something very important on the Bombers and who are they...? they are the new cg members Steered by passion,faith, and the unconscious, some of theme handle a very powerful projects this projects can explode your project or some part from it.
No one know when they strike depending on the unconscious.(that We talking on earlier).
so be careful in your next work.with my all wish to get what you want especially the award
good luck my friend.
Best regards

[Imaver]

I liked your work! - overall very good result :thumbsup:

And i agreed with other people - main point for future improvement could be the camera position and video editing

From my experience i can recommend you to watch simple and quite short video tutorials "Hollywood camera work"

Definitely, i really liked the face expressions of you characters

Good luck!

[alaa-afifah]

thanks for all of you
your critics will improve me

[bablu17]

very nice work,,,but the audio want some editing because it is not clear .

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