Character: Orc+Goblin = Orcling

[Electrofirma]

Great looking character! I think his lips look a little lifeless, but that will probably come together when you get to texturing.

All in all, a good piece of work! :thumbsup:

[nat]

looking good!
I want to see the legs :))
is he just going to be a torso?

[stantor]

Cool ! ;)

[cgg]

wow dude this is a nice mash
kewl model

[DoctorStopMo]

Hehe, nice work so far, but "orc" is just J.R.R. Tolkien's own word for goblin. In fact, in The Hobbit, he often calls them goblins instead of orcs. Nice detail in the facial region, and good anatomy. Hope to see the rest of him soon :)

[JohnR]

WOW, nice muscles, love it, keep on !!!:applause:

[LIMBAUL_ABIGGOR]

that is sweet the only thing that bugs me is the biecep, it seem short and not form quet right but i am sure u are going to fix it since its still WIP;)

[Kralle]

Coolest Orcling ive ever seen! ;)
Not that goblin kinda character, with head hanging low, this one looks cool and strong, like a action character or something! W00t! love it!
:thumbsup:

[3d42dustin]

thnx guys, i will post more up. asap

[3d42dustin]

heres an update

shoes are in proxy stage

http://www.angelfire.com/film/3d42dustin/face-body7.jpg

http://www.angelfire.com/film/3d42dustin/face-bodyn5.jpg

[mstl]

Nice work man......:applause:

[3d42dustin]

update
critiques welcome.




http://www.angelfire.com/film/3d42dustin/orc-muscle-f3.jpg

[Kralle]

this could truely be a action game character,
just need the b ig laser gun holding it like a machine gun or somehting

[Dennispls]

wow very good job on the body it looks very good

[sequestrian]

looks great, only problem I have is the arms look too short... check out mine...

http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?s=&threadid=84260

[3d42dustin]

update.
:buttrock:
http://www.angelfire.com/art2/dustinh47/orcling-prog-sept2.jpg
http://www.angelfire.com/art2/dustinh47/orcling-prog-sept2b.jpg

[dave_baer]

Wow, great skin details. Love the texturing so far.

The arms look good to me. The hands should be about mid-thigh when arms are down. Looks about right to me.

Sequestrian: The arms on yours look too long. :p

:beer:

[LIMBAUL_ABIGGOR]

hey nice job , the arm biecep is still not changed but i diffenently work for me now, nice job i think the arms are fine the way they are, because he is half orc and goblin, and goblin are usually small, just one thing can to show and tell us how you got the textures like that, like the spec map and color and bump, nice:beer:

[sequestrian]

dave_baer: oops, I didn't mean to say mine were any more proportional, I was just trying to get feedback on my character... ,':o)

but that brings a good point... if you meant for them to be disproportionately short, thats fine... as dave said, I made my character's super long...

[dave_baer]

:D

[3d42dustin]

Originally posted by LIMBAUL_ABIGGOR
hey nice job , the arm biecep is still not changed but i diffenently work for me now, nice job i think the arms are fine the way they are, because he is half orc and goblin, and goblin are usually small, just one thing can to show and tell us how you got the textures like that, like the spec map and color and bump, nice:beer:

the bicep does looks short form certain angles, i made it proportionally a cm or 2 shorter then normal to achieve the semi gobliny stubby orcy look lol...

but it still doesnt look correct so i will fix the geomeotry.. i was just buzy putting simple textures on the rest of the body didnt update the geometry yet :) i will make an update as soon as i am allowed to :)

[Kralle]

keep his shirt of,
makes him look dirty cough potatoe troll like,
make the pants more interesting,
like more detail, and more eye catching, right now they dont really seem to fitt.

Good job so far, i love this model

[TetsuoShima]

lo 3d42dustin and the others :P
I really love those textures, man. I think you should define a bit the tatoo of the back because looks a bit pixelated. have you any tutorial from yourself about doing those IMPRESSIVE textures, huh?
Talking bout the muscles... WOW! kewl!
:buttrock:

[tyio]

in which size the texture are ??? (mean 1024*1024 or other ??)

Maya render look realistc, keep update !! (but idon't like much the cloth, better with amor :))

[TetsuoShima]

maya render? think he/she's using xsi render (yeah, is mental ray too but mr for xsi :P)

[AndHolzmeister]

Nice model,
The only thing that i can think about is to pull out the eyebrows a little bit. Make it more outstanding. He´s body looks like a boxe fighter to me...

[3d42dustin]

thnx for critiques they are very help full guys..

tatoo on the back will be removed or replaced... due to lack to detail and pixelation as pointed out from member.

I agree, pants are too plain.. something must be done to make it interesting.. i will think of what to do asap.

ARMOR is probably a better idea. AGREED. will work on it asap as well. Update is comin just have to get an upload :)

its not maya.

its XSI softimage.

texture size for body is 3500x3500 resolution.

mesh total character triangulation sits at 700 000 to 1 million.

i dont have a tutorial for how i made the texture.. im just a rookie at 3d, still a student i only have couple months experience. I will make some sort of tut. later after my demo reel tis completed to show how the textures were painted and how i got the muscles to look the way it does.. :hmm: thnx for goin over my work. and when ever u have new ideas keep my informed :scream:

[KolbyJukes]

hey man,

Nice model! I think I saw you unwrapping this is in the term 3 lab.
My only crit is that the facial detail/style doesn't seem to match the torso detail. The torso is full of fairly-realistic soft well defined lines, where as the wrinkles in the head and the eyes seem somewhat extreme + stylized. I really like the texturing, the tats are a nice touch, but i think they'd look a lot better if they were faded and beaten up.

Anyway, as i said before, very nice.

-Kol.

[3d42dustin]

what term are u in? name?

thnx i will try to make the creases on the face shallower.

[TetsuoShima]

hey man I want a wire of the head. is it possible? :shrug: :D

[3d42dustin]

wire frame of head as reqquested. only a few triangles hidden deep in the ear.. not visible. :) This guy is positively QUADS! cept for the big triangle at the flap of the ear.. which isnt a prob :)

http://www.angelfire.com/art2/dustinh47/gob-wireframe-head.jpg

[NickBFTD]

looks like there is a bad pong in the room

i love how he looks like a rapper like 50 cent or somthing

its cool :buttrock:

[3d42dustin]

Originally posted by NickBFTD
looks like there is a bad pong in the room

i love how he looks like a rapper like 50 cent or somthing

its cool :buttrock:

lol HAHAHAH seriously?! :drool:

[NickBFTD]

i dont mean the face looks like 50 cent, just the upper body has that kinda look to it

[3d42dustin]

update.
gonna make armor and better textures for some elements.. like gloves, perhaps pants.

working on set now.

http://www.angelfire.com/art2/dustinh47/orcling-prog-sept7.jpg :wavey:

[LaDoSKuRo]

Really nice work, the muscles and veins... are just perfect to me, but maybe the clothes are not enough ...violent... for a orc/goblin.

[RedFish]

I really like where you are going with this... I cannot wait to see it with armor on.

[3d42dustin]

yes.. agreed cloth just makes the character look weak especially when his face is displaying a strong character.

i have to rework the cloth make it more clothlike... and armor is a must :) thank you for ideas :) :wavey:

[TetsuoShima]

again it is an awesome character. I like the shirt but agree with the others, he needs a great armor.
there also are 2 things Id change a bit: first the too high shiny gloves and then the footwear (dont like that shape) :P
really like that character

[p0lym0rph]

verry nice character:applause:

[3d42dustin]

thnx for input people ")

[prayas]

That is a damn nice char you have created her but some things are still to mention. I personally don't like the gloves the look more suitable for a female char or a magician. The texture on his pants look like towel material:) Don't know how this is called in english. The face is da bomb and the texture with all that veins is killer too. What i love most is the big tattoo on his back.

Keep 'em comin.

P..:

[babaloud]

wow....

great work

i'm looking foward to see the armour.

[CBAS]

with the shirt and the gloves on he looks just like a pissed off garbageman... :p

anyways great modeling work, keep it up :thumbsup:

[TetsuoShima]

Originally posted by CBAS
(...)he looks just like a pissed off garbageman(...)

HAHAHAHA yeah! :applause: that's it

btw: any update? :rolleyes:

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