Character: tortoise

[playmesumch00ns]

I like it a lot, but the shell seems a bit sharp compared to the rest of the body, it might be a good idea to break it up a bit.

Also, have you used sss/transulency? The effect seems a bit strong for me, and the lighting on both pictures (esp. the second one, for a night-time shot) is a bit blown out.

Nice model!:thumbsup:

[Damm]

yeah that's a pretty sharp shell

other than that it's a lovely pic :D
the turtoise looks really real ;).. good work

[TIO_MATT]

Thanks I will keep those constructive critics,
The shel is like that because is still young tortoise not and old one though, younger tend to have sharper shells.

Thanks:

:)

[phgroove]

no bad at all, but...yep the "house" is too sharp, maybe a little MTD would add some more "less sphere surface" to it!?!?

[stezzy]

not bad too...i am sure your tortise would be proud of you heheheh....and people believe that who rear this kind of tortise if take care of the it will be rich soon hahahah:cool:


good work

cheers

[TheGreenGiant]

very beautiful. Your tutle sUURE is lazy to not move at all. Reminds me of my skanky housemate.

Is the second Night shot a photoshop job? The sub surface scattering is quite nice although it doesn't look real. The shell should be displaced a bit to make it more textural. It's pretty evident that its a bumpmap.

[Magius]

Very nice model!

i think the textures are bery good!.. but i think there is too much space in the "turtle house"...

[stantor]

Great ! :applause:

[Youth]

Amazing!!!!


Please wire!!!!

[TIO_MATT]

Here are some references of shape, younger ones tend to be even more rounded.

Botton:

http://www.iespana.es/tortuga_es/marg.baby.plas.jpg

Round shape:

http://home.earthlink.net/~rednine/baby3.jpg

:)

[TIO_MATT]

Here are more Wip Images of it.
Thanks for all your critics.


http://perso.wanadoo.es/calizp/HOJA_39.jpg

:wip::wip:

[Kel Solaar]

Nice work! and Cute Turtle :) she is maybe too much round

[luigi]

come on tio matt dont be lazy and put the wire.

i have sen it and is incredible.

i like the house as you say is a children tortoise

love the lighting.

[joana]

it is perfect for me!:)

[TIO_MATT]

Thanks luigi,

I will try to find some wires, and post them.
I tried to keep a round shape of the shell to give a cute aspect of the tortoise.

If I find time I will make another render for another view.




:beer::shrug:

[Tidus_44]

well i really have nothing to say. but i will say that at first i thought we were supposed to compare your totus with a photograph, till i realized they were the same thing. very excellent work
:buttrock: :thumbsup: :drool:

[tongplai]

awesome!!

[TIO_MATT]

Here are some work in progress images I just find them interesting too.

I will post the wires soon.

Thanks:

TIO_MATT



http://perso.wanadoo.es/calizp/Untitled-1.gif

:wip: :wip:

[wgreenlee1]

Awesome modeling!!

[torbjorn]

the legs look like what we in sweden call "kottar" but it's great, the textures are awesome..put him in water now...where he belongs :p

[Kinjiru]

man! that turtle is awsome!

love it!

..and at nigth it becames a Ninja Turtle!!

[Adam4000]

great job

[Bozo]

Yep

:thumbsup:

i really like your render and the modeling. U make it live that's very impressive.

Do u think u get time for a little animation on day ? maybe ? no ?

:drool:

anyway
well done !!!

[Oscarini]

Good one - definetly! :buttrock:
U see - some people are still botherin' their mind - how to get good look of their models - others are allready playin'around with day/night lightnin'! :applause: :thumbsup: :beer:

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