PDA

View Full Version : Environment: Quiet Strret


pandaA
08-28-2003, 07:53 AM
http://julienno.free.fr/images_3d/2003/ruelle_finale.jpg

Once of my latest scenes, modeling in 3ds max 5.1, render with Vray

Feel free to comment! THX

ReSeT
08-28-2003, 12:19 PM
Hi!

Nice rendering and lightning. This picture gives me the impression, that it has been painted.

For my taste the shadows are a little bit too dark (maybe some fill lights?) and i wish I could see more from the environment.

But overall : :thumbsup:

GreetZ

Dane

pandaA
08-28-2003, 12:41 PM
Yes, my goal was to do a picture more like an illustration than a photo ! The shadows are dark because i really like contrast but i'll maybe make some new renders with other setup of light...

mjx
08-28-2003, 12:48 PM
your rendering is beautiful!:thumbsup: look like real!

PCollier
08-28-2003, 12:54 PM
This is really great! it has a real nice sense of atmosphere think the kind of subtle rustic colours work well to give it that olde town feel :thumbsup: Only crit I would say is that I think the castle wall in the far background is a little out of scale and the textures look a bit blurred. The rest however is brilliant. Front page I think!

pandaA
08-28-2003, 04:09 PM
The wireFrame!

http://julienno.free.fr/stock/ruelle_wire.jpg
:)

M.Rogne
08-28-2003, 05:41 PM
Damn I like it... It really has that 'aged' feel to it, especielly on the objects, they look worn.:thumbsup:

otacon
08-28-2003, 05:52 PM
Nice. Especially the wall on the left, really good texturing.:thumbsup:

Dreamwave
08-28-2003, 07:25 PM
wow, very nice, very close to realism, awsome textures too!

hanzo
08-28-2003, 07:31 PM
:cool: pandaA: I like it, the amount of deatal is excellent, I only got one crit for the morning that renders shadows are way to dark I think you should lighten them up :annoyed:

wgreenlee1
08-28-2003, 07:53 PM
Oh thats really cool!
Would love to see a giant render!

wgreenlee1
08-29-2003, 06:59 AM
***bump***

I cannnot belive there are no comments more to add here....?
This is a great work!

Still waiting for a bigger render though.:thumbsup:

pandaA
08-29-2003, 05:27 PM
Thanx every body for your comments, I will modify the details that you 've highlighted to do better render the next time!!:D

chlywly
08-29-2003, 05:31 PM
I like it too, but the walk way bothers me it looks way too narrow, seems like people would be tripping over their own feet trying to walk on that thing. :surprised

pandaA
09-01-2003, 09:06 PM
Chywly, what do you mead by "It looks way too narrow" I m frenc, i don't understand, can you explain with another words? please

milqman
09-01-2003, 10:05 PM
i see what he means.

The part where it appears the humans should be walking is much too narrow. The people would be walking single file.

3DArtZ
09-01-2003, 10:25 PM
That's exactly what I was thinking!
First off, it is a great piece with some issues. The issues are that some elements are out of scale.
The bench outside the door looks way to big and the sidewalk is way to narrow.
Aside from these issues, this is a fantastic piece of work!
Mike Fitz

baddog
09-01-2003, 11:11 PM
I believe thats a gutter/drain not a walkway

Shaun

danger_duck
09-01-2003, 11:19 PM
Originally posted by baddog
I believe thats a gutter/drain not a walkway

Shaun


Yea hes right...if thats the medieval type timeline then thats where al the sh*t gets flushed down and in2 a river.. correct me if im wrong though.

Dean

Gregwid
09-02-2003, 12:33 AM
There are some scale issues,but all in all this is a nice piece,looks rich in detail and color.Nice work.:beer:

TWooster
09-02-2003, 01:43 AM
Cool. Nice painterly look.

Aside from the walkway being small, some things look too crisp. I noticed it first on the windows -- the metal is too angular or the texture repeats too much or something. Needs a little touching up.

Also, as is visible in the wireframe, but not so much in the picture, the barrels on the right side seem to sink below the ground.

Anyway, cheers,
good work,

-Tony

pandaA
09-02-2003, 09:08 AM
Thanks for explainations, now I understand what "narrow" means, but in the middle age the streets were narrow, there was no big avenues with many people can walk!! I'm agree there's maybe some scale issues, but this pictures is more fantaisist than réalistic!!!

quote:
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Originally posted by baddog
I believe thats a gutter/drain not a walkway

Yes your're right !! :buttrock:

I will try to correct some deatils you notice me, some scale and lightning touching up :D

Kel Solaar
09-02-2003, 10:37 AM
Nice Panda, it's better than the renders you show on 3dvf, you have really improved your picture. Myabe some color correction with photoshop to add more contrast. Great job :thumbsup:

animalunae
09-02-2003, 03:25 PM
Oh, this is just lovely! I'm currently building Camelot City and I've been looking for nice artwork for reference, didn't found much though, till now.
This scene is amazing! Really love this one and I hope if you don't mind me stealing your little archway idea... hehe, gives a really nice mood to it all.

Btw To Lildragon: why isn't this on the frontpage?

TheGreenGiant
09-02-2003, 03:45 PM
frontpage? I personally don't think that render is that great - it is nice but looking at it, I don't understand why you guys are all going bananas over it. Its competent at best. The textures that you've used seemed to all be given a gaussian blur treatment and the barrels on the right seem to have sunk into the ground (if you look at where the 2nd copper hoop is, you will see what I mean).

animalunae
09-02-2003, 03:50 PM
Ofcourse it's a matter of taste, but this image has got a very good feel... and you should always try to learn from work that's better then yours, giant

pandaA
09-02-2003, 04:10 PM
Thanx, everybody for your support and the others for their critics, I recognize that this is image is not perfect, but I worked especially on the mood and the lights!!
Soon I'll correct the things you noticed to do a greater iimage and maybe this one will be on the front page...

CGTalk Moderation
01-15-2006, 11:00 PM
This thread has been automatically closed as it remained inactive for 12 months. If you wish to continue the discussion, please create a new thread in the appropriate forum.