WIP: she's baaack

[bobtronic]

Hi Adam,

Nice to see a character from you. She looks great.
I think she as a slightly asian touch. Can we get
a closer view of the head ?

cheers, Bob

[pit]

Hi Adam,
nice progress!

Some nitpicking:
You could delete one row of polys at the wrists - they seem very long.

Left thumb, you seem to have accidentially pulled a vertex here - or maybe left it out when weighting with CB?

The feet seem small - it might be the angle (- as a rule of thumb a foot is as big as the distance from elbow to wrist.)

The biggest issue I see, is how the polys loop from the breast into the shoulder - that might cause some deformation trouble. The loop that is broken by the tri ought to continue as the shoulder. Should be fairly easy to correct though.

Cheers

[neilyb]

Fab! Only problem I would add is the groin area, looks a bit broken and sharp, could be the angle or lighting?

[AdamT]

Thanks fellas!

Pit: great tips as always. That armpit transition was bugging me, but you are absolutely right--was easy to get rid of that triangle there. About the wrists, I could lose a row of polys, but I think the bigger problem is that they're too thin. Good pickup on the thumb vert--need to adjust that CB map. The feet aren't quite done, but they are proportional, i.e., one forearm or 1 1/3 head. I think the lighting and angle make them look smaller.

neilyb: I didn't put too much work into the groin area, since she won't be nekkid in the final product. Whatdya think this is, Renderosity? :)

bobtronic: funny how when you come back after a few months a model you were reasonably happy with can look like sh*t. Well, that's a little strong, but I'm not too happy with the head at the moment. Hence the dim lighting:

http://bellsouthpwp.net/A/d/AdamTrachtenberg/Head_dim2.jpg

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