Environment:The silent valley

[elhuppi]

Great start LiSuli

The picture already has some realism to it. But in my opinion the shadows are to dark for a daylight environmental lighting. Especially the right side of the canyon looks almost like the set is ending. Also the strange metal-looking kinda structures at the top right border are very confusing. I get the impression that the black part is spared for some life-action footage and this image might be an digital set extension.

But as it is at the moment the right upper corner looks strange.

Other than that I really like this image as well as your train image.

[LiSuli]

Thank you ,Hugh P. Rich!!!:)
In 3D art I am self-teached and try to do better.
Originally I want to creat a vision of the sunlight being projected from a rock rift.
The right upper corner is a bad idea of mine.
Thanks for the crits again.

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