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YuriyXXX
01-19-2010, 12:42 PM
Yuriy Lozitskiy is entered in the "B-Movie" update: View Challenge Page (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/b-movie/view_entries.php?challenger=19027)

Latest Update: Finished Video: Trailer
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1271440840_medium.jpg (http://forums.cgsociety.org/showthread.php?p=6467793#post6467793)

YuriyXXX
01-19-2010, 12:44 PM
My idea for doing a video is:

"Attack of the unbreakable eggs"

YuriyXXX
01-19-2010, 05:29 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1263925797_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1263925797_medium.jpg)

gathering some images to narrow down the idea of the look, feel, mood, etc...

YuriyXXX
01-20-2010, 05:45 PM
Here is the tentative script for my entry:



FADE IN:
INT. KITCHEN - MORNING

The kitchen is clean, but the fridge door is open.
A guy stumbles into the kitchen and his eyes are barely open.
He is still wearing his pajamas.
He turns to the fridge and realizes it is open.
He stares at it for a second while rubbing his eye.
He shrugs it off and reaches in to get some bacon and eggs.
The guy plops a pan on the stove top, and puts some bacon on it.
He yawns while staring out the window.
After almost falling asleep he looks down at the pan.
Bacon looks cooked so he reaches for an egg and clanks it on the side of the pan.
Realizing the egg is not broken he whacks the egg again, same outcome.
He brings the egg up to his face for inspection. The egg looks fine, just like the rest.
He takes out a butter knife and whacks the egg with it. The knife just bounces right off.
Guy drops the knife into the sink and in frustration squeezes the egg with both hands.
After failing to squash the egg he throws it on the floor.
The egg bounces off the floor and hits the guy right in the eye.
The guy is now furious. He pick up the egg and slams it on the counter.
He gets out the butcher knife and raises it above his head.
The knife comes down right on the egg but glances off it and gets stuck in the counter.
The egg in the meantime shoots from under the knife and breaks a vase on the kitchen table.
The guy storms off into the hallway and comes back with a sledge hammer.
He grabs the egg off the kitchen table and puts it in the middle of the floor.
Sledge hammer goes up and comes down right on top of the egg.
But instead of breaking, the egg just splits into two.
Frustrated and amazed at what he is seeing, the guy just keeps on smashing the eggs.
And the eggs just keep on multiplying.
Exhausted, the guy stops to see what he has done.
The whole floor of his kitchen is filled with eggs, unbreakable eggs.
To his astonishment the eggs start to move and swarm into a blob right in front of him.
The guy just stands there with his eyes wide open, frozen.
The swarm attacks the guy and he is no match.
After being done with the guy's limp body, the swarm leaves through the window...

YuriyXXX
01-21-2010, 02:55 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1264089304_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1264089304_medium.jpg)

part 1 of 3 of the storyboard

YuriyXXX
01-21-2010, 02:55 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1264089338_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1264089338_medium.jpg)

part 2 of 3 of the storyboard

YuriyXXX
01-21-2010, 02:56 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1264089371_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1264089371_medium.jpg)

part 3 of 3 of the storyboard

YuriyXXX
01-21-2010, 07:44 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1264106658_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1264106658_medium.jpg)

Did some sketches to figure out the body type for the main character.

Miked08
01-22-2010, 08:01 AM
Really liking the storyboards matey! I would never do such detailed ones but I admire your detailed approach

deagel
01-22-2010, 10:34 AM
sounds fun! really like it !

and i love your storyboard, waht software did you use to do it? any specific or just some hand-work?

cheers

alex

YuriyXXX
01-22-2010, 12:50 PM
Thank you for the comments.

The storyboard is made with photoshop, nothing fancy.

YuriyXXX
01-22-2010, 01:26 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1264170391_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1264170391_medium.jpg)

Narrowing down the look of the character.

YuriyXXX
01-22-2010, 05:06 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1264183576_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1264183576_medium.jpg)

quick sketches to figure out a good head shape

YuriyXXX
01-22-2010, 05:07 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1264183625_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1264183625_medium.jpg)

working out the body and head together.

YuriyXXX
01-26-2010, 07:30 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1264537848_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1264537848_medium.jpg)

more detailed study of the head shape.

YuriyXXX
01-27-2010, 08:46 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1264628796_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1264628796_medium.jpg)

Full body study of the main character.

YuriyXXX
01-28-2010, 03:28 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1264696136_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1264696136_medium.jpg)

made head plates for the main character

YuriyXXX
01-28-2010, 03:29 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1264696186_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1264696186_medium.jpg)

made body plates for the main character.

next is the environment design.

YuriyXXX
01-28-2010, 08:15 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1264713347_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1264713347_medium.jpg)

Main character mesh.

YuriyXXX
02-01-2010, 01:42 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1265035326_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1265035326_medium.jpg)

working on the head of the guy.

Noukah
02-02-2010, 11:02 PM
Oh!
I really dig the preproduction of this one so far :)
Nice character development and storyboards!

YuriyXXX
02-03-2010, 04:10 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1265217025_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1265217025_medium.jpg)

Thank you for the comments

This is the design of the environment.

YuriyXXX
02-03-2010, 05:35 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1265222120_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1265222120_medium.jpg)

here are the elevations

YuriyXXX
02-03-2010, 09:21 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1265235661_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1265235661_medium.jpg)

working on the environment.

YuriyXXX
02-04-2010, 05:22 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1265307722_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1265307722_medium.jpg)

working on the room and some minor updates on the character.

YuriyXXX
02-04-2010, 07:29 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1265315358_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1265315358_medium.jpg)

more work done on the room

YuriyXXX
02-05-2010, 05:20 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1265394036_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1265394036_medium.jpg)

finisedh the room. next on the list is all the props

YuriyXXX
02-10-2010, 03:45 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1265820312_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1265820312_medium.jpg)

adding final touches to the guy

YuriyXXX
02-12-2010, 11:29 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1266020967_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1266020967_medium.jpg)

Started to do some R&D on the egg monster.

VIDEO:

http://vimeo.com/9415238

sagarfunde
02-13-2010, 02:50 AM
Thats Interesting one. I m curious now to see more about your monster.

Good Luck :applause:

YuriyXXX
02-16-2010, 07:03 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1266350598_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1266350598_medium.jpg)

working on the rig for the character. body is almost done, next up is the face rig.

YuriyXXX
02-18-2010, 06:46 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1266522373_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1266522373_medium.jpg)

Adding more detail and items to the scene.

At the same time testing out lighting.

YuriyXXX
02-18-2010, 07:08 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1266523678_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1266523678_medium.jpg)

testing a chrome material in the room.

overcontrast
02-22-2010, 05:47 PM
the kitchen is looking pretty good. Nice render too. this should be fun to watch... keep it up.

YuriyXXX
02-23-2010, 06:18 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1266952685_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1266952685_medium.jpg)

Thank you for the comment.

Working on making a bone driven blend shapes, sort of.
So far I have an open shape and a smile shape. I will post an animation of those soon.

RavenEye
02-23-2010, 09:23 PM
I really like your character design and your concept. Made me giggle a little bit. One thing that I can suggest is that your kitchen doesn't fit the character design too well. The kitchen comes off as too realistic compared to your main character. Maybe cartoon up the kitchen a bit.

borisignjatovic
02-23-2010, 10:11 PM
Great modeling mate. As RavenEye said. Its too realistic for that kind of a character.

Also the character is awesome, face is killer...only thing I didnt like is the belly. To big for that skinny face. But thats my opinion.

Keep up the good work.

YuriyXXX
02-23-2010, 11:57 PM
Thanks for the comments and input.

Have not really occurred to me the style difference (been staring it for too long). I will probably change the kitchen to match the character, once I finish making all of the meshes. Not sure how to go about doing that yet.

Here is the video of the blend shapes working:

http://vimeo.com/9689509

YuriyXXX
02-25-2010, 06:40 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1267126853_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1267126853_medium.jpg)

working on more blend shapes.

YuriyXXX
02-26-2010, 03:37 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1267202238_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1267202238_medium.jpg)

All of the blend shapes driven by bones, so I will have fine adjustment control of the whole face.

YuriyXXX
02-26-2010, 03:39 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1267202363_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1267202363_medium.jpg)

combined character and the room to see if they work together.

Alexsani
02-27-2010, 05:58 PM
I feel like he is a little too pink, with perhaps too much scattering... But the modelling is great, he manages to fit his background, and I can't wait to see it textured.

BebeteLANUITE
03-01-2010, 05:36 AM
The kitchen is very good.
I like the character.
Can't wait to see the animation ;-)

hikuT3F
03-01-2010, 08:17 PM
I really like the details on the kitchen. I can't wait to see you put texture on it.

YuriyXXX
03-01-2010, 09:06 PM
Thank you for the comments.
I am looking forward to texturing and animation. The rig for the character is finished including the facial setup. Next I will finish up all the kitchen and prop modeling while testing it with the kitchen rig for intersection and such. Once that's done, it is UV time, so excited...


Working on the light setup and models to make sure that light fixture geometry is going to work with light setup.

http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1267481178_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1267481178_medium.jpg)

YuriyXXX
03-02-2010, 05:13 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1267553582_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1267553582_medium.jpg)

Working on the skeleton of the character as it will be used in the end of the animation.

YuriyXXX
03-02-2010, 09:17 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1267568240_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1267568240_medium.jpg)

Almost finished the skeleton today, only a few bones left.

YuriyXXX
03-03-2010, 02:17 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1267629443_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1267629443_medium.jpg)

finished the skeleton and it fits right inside the character.

YuriyXXX
03-03-2010, 05:35 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1267641299_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1267641299_medium.jpg)

This is the finished mesh for the character.

YuriyXXX
03-03-2010, 05:44 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1267641891_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1267641891_medium.jpg)

This is the final mesh for the character's skeleton.

YuriyXXX
03-03-2010, 08:25 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1267651524_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1267651524_medium.jpg)

Finishing up all of the items in the kitchen, just a few props left.

YuriyXXX
03-03-2010, 09:26 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1267655161_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1267655161_medium.jpg)

Finished all the modeling for this animation, onto UVing now.

YuriyXXX
03-03-2010, 09:27 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1267655221_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1267655221_medium.jpg)

Here are all iso views of the room.

YuriyXXX
03-04-2010, 06:49 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1267732148_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1267732148_medium.jpg)

Finished the character's uv layout.

chino01
03-04-2010, 10:13 PM
It's growing up great i think...
Waiting for the textures to be done...
Good work...

YuriyXXX
03-05-2010, 03:29 PM
Thank you for the comments

http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1267806586_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1267806586_medium.jpg)

Layed out UVs for the skeleton. Next up is the kitchen.

YuriyXXX
03-05-2010, 09:01 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1267826501_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1267826501_medium.jpg)

Unwrapping the room, still need to do the props and than just pack it all on a few 4k maps.

YuriyXXX
03-09-2010, 01:32 AM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1268101926_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1268101926_medium.jpg)

Finished UVs on the room. 1 of 3 4k maps.

YuriyXXX
03-09-2010, 01:32 AM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1268101962_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1268101962_medium.jpg)

Finished UVs on the room. 2 of 3 4k maps.

YuriyXXX
03-09-2010, 01:34 AM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1268102069_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1268102069_medium.jpg)

Finished UVs on the room. 3 of 3 4k maps.

YuriyXXX
03-09-2010, 10:01 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1268175668_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1268175668_medium.jpg)

Making a layout of the animation to see how it is feeling.

I have a problem where I can't upload my flv video with CGuploader and I get this message:
"this feature is only available to cgs members"

But here is a video anyway for now:
http://www.vimeo.com/10047379

borisignjatovic
03-10-2010, 10:44 AM
Very nice modeling, and texturing job. The animation is very good. Timing is right. I like the poses.

Good job and keep up!

RavenEye
03-10-2010, 01:41 PM
Cool poses.


I'm having the same issue of not being able to upload a flv with the cgUploader. Hope you figure it out.

YuriyXXX
03-10-2010, 10:58 PM
Thank you for the comments

http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1268265489_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1268265489_medium.jpg)

Finished the layout of the animation.
Next up is to make basic textures before animating the whole thing.

http://www.vimeo.com/10075495

andreasng
03-11-2010, 03:38 PM
this might be too late for you, since it looks like you have finished rigging and skinning.

i looked at your blocking ->
and if you want really really nice poses - it would do your character good if you added a joint between the shoulder and elbow, and a joint between the elbow and the wrist. This joint should be free transformed to create more fluid poses, so you would avoid those not so nice looking straight arms.

your set up (x shoulder, o elbow, C hand)
X-----o-----C

awesome posing setup (x shoulder, z awesome joint, o elbow, z awesome joint, C hand)
X--z--o--z--C

good luck. the idea is funny.

YuriyXXX
03-11-2010, 09:47 PM
Thank you for bringing it up.
I do have that setup in my rig, but I have never used bendable limbs like that. I am interested in trying it out though.

http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1268347621_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1268347621_medium.jpg)

Making a base layer for the character's color map to see how it deforms during the animation process.

YuriyXXX
03-12-2010, 08:07 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1268428063_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1268428063_medium.jpg)

worked out the basic colors of the main character.

YuriyXXX
03-12-2010, 08:13 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1268428402_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1268428402_medium.jpg)

worked out the basic colors of the main character.

Slozhny
03-13-2010, 10:17 AM
Hi, Yura. What the 3d application you use?

YuriyXXX
03-13-2010, 02:03 PM
I used 3ds max for all of the modeling and maya for all of the rigging and animation.

YuriyXXX
03-17-2010, 01:25 AM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1268789145_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1268789145_medium.jpg)

working on the animation.

here is the video:
http://www.vimeo.com/10221694

still can't upload the video to cgSociety, any help?

YuriyXXX
03-18-2010, 02:10 AM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1268878245_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1268878245_medium.jpg)

Taking a slightly different approach at the animation:

http://vimeo.com/10245226

hikuT3F
03-22-2010, 09:30 PM
wow, very nice animation.

YuriyXXX
03-24-2010, 12:57 AM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1269392242_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1269392242_medium.jpg)

Thank you.

Blocked out the character animation only.
Up next is splining and cleaning up.

http://vimeo.com/10390699

Admins, I am still unable to upload video through CGUploader because I am not a cgs member.
Any help?

YuriyXXX
03-24-2010, 01:03 AM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1269392594_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1269392594_medium.jpg)

Worked on second pass character timing and weight animation.

http://vimeo.com/10390661

Admins, I am still unable to upload video through CGUploader because I am not a cgs member.
Any help?

khendar
03-25-2010, 02:10 AM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1269392594_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1269392594_medium.jpg)

Worked on second pass character timing and weight animation.

http://vimeo.com/10390661

Admins, I am still unable to upload video through CGUploader because I am not a cgs member.
Any help?

Are you sure you are using the ChallengeUploader (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/b-movie/challengeuploader.jar) not the CGUploader ?

YuriyXXX
03-25-2010, 03:23 AM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1269487415_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1269487415_medium.jpg)

Thank you khendar. I will try that.

spline pass frames 1-400.

http://www.vimeo.com/10423649

YuriyXXX
03-25-2010, 03:29 AM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1269487741_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1269487741_medium.jpg)

Software: Maya

working on frames 1-400

Play Video >> (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/b-movie/player.php?entry_id=113015)

same video as above but this time it is through cgsociety uploader

YuriyXXX
03-25-2010, 09:20 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1269552052_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1269552052_medium.jpg)

Software: Maya,mental ray

Worked on frames 400-500.

Had some fun playing with time warping. Let me know what you think.

Play Video >> (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/b-movie/player.php?entry_id=113023)

bstout
03-25-2010, 10:20 PM
great animation. nice work.
when you "break the elbow" you really "break the elbow". personally i think that it would like better with a litte shoulder rotation so it would like more believable and less rag doll. he is also a little rubbery coming out the yawn/stretch. the rest of your animation has a lot more snap to it.
i like the overall speed of the piece, but you might want to slow down the stretch, let him enjoy it.
drinking the coffee, opening the fridge is all well executed.
the first egg crack is good, the second need a harder/faster hit by just a little, the third a lot faster.
I totally miss that he grabs the egg as he turns. maybe a camera close up on the hand/egg on those frames if you want to keep that timing.
I like the throw.
I would say the dramatic pose at the end is too much but it feeds into the overly dramatic covering his eyes that he does. So it works as a consistent bit.

Anyway that's my thoughts, hope it's not too much. Keep up the good work.

YuriyXXX
03-26-2010, 12:55 PM
thank you bstout,

I need more replies like that, I'll apply it to my work.

YuriyXXX
03-26-2010, 10:11 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1269641513_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1269641513_medium.jpg)

Software: Maya,mental ray

working on frames 500-600

Play Video >> (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/b-movie/player.php?entry_id=113043)

ChristopheFauconneau
03-27-2010, 03:59 AM
Your animation is working pretty fine to me. You bring life to your character, he might breath and speak. One crit would be about the field of view you choose when you stretch his spine, his backhead is out of field when he pull it backside and it might break motion flow for the viewer.
Very cool entry. Good luck YuriyXXX:thumbsup:

YuriyXXX
03-27-2010, 06:59 PM
Thank you for your input ChristopheFauconneau, I am making a list of suggestion to look off when I make a third pass of clean up on the character animation.

YuriyXXX
03-29-2010, 06:11 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1269886298_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1269886298_medium.jpg)

Software: Maya,mental ray

Working on frames 520-767

Play Video >> (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/b-movie/player.php?entry_id=113076)

YuriyXXX
03-30-2010, 09:41 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1269985312_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1269985312_medium.jpg)

Software: Maya,mental ray

Working on the final shot. Still need to simulate the skeleton collapse down and the egg cracking on the floor.

Next up after that is to work on feet hands and face to finish up the character animation.

Play Video >> (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/b-movie/player.php?entry_id=113087)

YuriyXXX
03-31-2010, 06:54 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1270061647_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1270061647_medium.jpg)

Software: Maya

Finished the animation for now, I will come back and tweek if there will be time left before I set off the renders.

Next step would be lighting and texturing.

Play Video >> (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/b-movie/player.php?entry_id=113102)

YuriyXXX
04-01-2010, 09:19 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1270156729_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1270156729_medium.jpg)

Software: 3ds max,mental ray

This is the finished head diffuse texture.
This sss material is all being driven by a single map, so it is not as fine tuned as it will be in the end when I create separate epidermal, subdermal, bump and spec maps.

Up next is the body textures

til0r
04-05-2010, 03:21 AM
I'm really enjoying following your process. Solid work and great insight!

YuriyXXX
04-05-2010, 08:14 PM
Thank you for the comment

http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1270498459_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1270498459_medium.jpg)

Software: 3ds max,mental ray,Photoshop

Finished all of the maps for tha character, next up is the skeleton, then the kitchen.

YuriyXXX
04-05-2010, 08:38 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1270499930_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1270499930_medium.jpg)

Software: 3ds max,mental ray,Photoshop

Final skeleton material.

YuriyXXX
04-08-2010, 07:46 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1270755981_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1270755981_medium.jpg)

Software: After Effects,Maya,mental ray

Doing a test on all of the textures and compositing.

let me know what you think

Play Video >> (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/b-movie/player.php?entry_id=113201)

Staszek
04-08-2010, 08:30 PM
hey YuriyXXX

Lighting looks very good. You did realy nice work on modeling and uvw in this kitchen , only color missing there :) . Shadering seams to be cool but its hard to say when everything blend together and because of antyaliasing. Too much same color everywhere. It would be nice to see rendered frame with higher rednering antyalising quality to see those nice details you did.

At beginnning you posted colors pallete you wish to use, and i sugest to back to your old colors idea.
Play with color and it will be realy cool!

YuriyXXX
04-09-2010, 01:26 PM
Thank you Staszek for your input.

Next video will have high AA quality so it will be easier to see the detail. I was trying to keep colors very simple and dual monochrome - orange/green, in order to keep the viewer's eye going where I want it to go. But I still have the option to play with colors in post to see If I like color variety over what I have now.

YuriyXXX
04-09-2010, 01:31 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1270819858_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1270819858_medium.jpg)

Software: After Effects,Maya,mental ray,Photoshop

The whole animation was rendered to see how material and lights acted. There was a problem with the egg being spiky, which is fixed now. There is also a problem in the end with cached egg yolk, which I need to look at. I will add FG to the final animation, which will lighten up the shadows a bit.

Play Video >> (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/b-movie/player.php?entry_id=113208)

YuriyXXX
04-13-2010, 03:52 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1271173961_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1271173961_medium.jpg)

Software: 3ds max,After Effects,Maya,mental ray,Photoshop

This is the "Making of Video"

Play Video >> (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/b-movie/player.php?entry_id=113249)

YuriyXXX
04-16-2010, 05:25 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1271438753_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1271438753_medium.jpg)

Software: 3ds max,After Effects,Maya,mental ray,Photoshop

Here is the final movie.

Play Video >> (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/b-movie/player.php?entry_id=113302)

YuriyXXX
04-16-2010, 05:30 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1271439025_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1271439025_medium.jpg)

Software: 3ds max,After Effects,Maya,mental ray,Photoshop

This is the final making of video

Play Video >> (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/b-movie/player.php?entry_id=113303)

YuriyXXX
04-16-2010, 06:00 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1271440840_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/27/19027/19027_1271440840_medium.jpg)

Software: 3ds max,After Effects,Maya,mental ray,Photoshop

This is the trailer

Play Video >> (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/b-movie/player.php?entry_id=113307)

opentarget
04-16-2010, 08:06 PM
congrats to you! great movies, well done for all your hardwork!

bstout
04-17-2010, 12:16 AM
nice work. fun concept.

Pangloss
04-17-2010, 12:05 PM
Congrats ! Very well done:beer:

adib
04-18-2010, 02:15 PM
Very nice movie! Cool concept,and at the end you put the feel of B-Movie as well!
Good Luck!

JurajMolcak
04-19-2010, 07:35 AM
nice entry! I like the subtle soundtrack you have in and overall light atmosphere. The animation could be sometimes more snappy and dinamic, but I guess it is a matter of taste. Good luck!

fgdf
04-19-2010, 01:23 PM
Congrats. I wish it was longer through!!
good luck
_BB

YuriyXXX
04-19-2010, 03:06 PM
Thank you for all of the comments. Good luck to all.

lobuh
09-09-2010, 05:30 PM
great work! loved the metal plate in is skull :P

picklebrad
09-16-2010, 05:49 AM
Amazing job! I love the concept and the textures look solid. Just a note...I think you spelled "The" wrong in the "What if the egg won't break". :argh:

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