character: blueeyed girl

[superfly18]

Alright my man, off to a great start here. I think your main problems lie within these 4 aspects:

1. Those lips, as you have already pointed out yourself. I think, if you're looking for a more realistic feel, you make the color a wee bit more pink and lower its strength so that we see some bump on the lips. I'm not sure if there is any other way to explain it, its ultimately the color.

2. The shirt my friend. Sexy in an atheletic kind of way ;) Looks like you might have gotten kinda of lazy towards this point, but try not to!! :thumbsup: The colors are too colorful, as in, there's no roughness to the shirt or visible vabric marks of any type, which kind of gives off the feel that its not real.

3. Presentation. A simple black background i think would have turned out fine, but the clouds...she must be one of the super hero babes.:cool:

4. Lastly, maybe add some veins within the white of the eyes. Might help with some overall balance.

Hey man, i hate to crack down like this..but i think you got something really good to work with here. While you've got a few things to work on (don't we all), the potential is there and its fantastic. Just keep up all the hard work and you'll be awarded. And remember what everyone says about your picture, that its just their opinion...art is something noone can tell what it should exactly be, so you be the artist, and make your art. Cause its what you see, not us. :thumbsup:

[diziple]

Hey superfly18

Thanks for your feedback... I'll will look into the things you pointed out :)

[sixthe45]

There are a couple of things you can do.
---neck and shoulder region(put some bones)presently looks too plain
---eye brows(she needs them)
---eyes are giving a very stiff feel(create a relaxed look)
---lower eyelid make it a bit more curvy
---skin texture need more work.
---hair line (shift it up a bit)
Hope this helps.:)

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