Roninfang
01-11-2010, 02:05 PM
Its been a while since i last posted something here ^_^ probably the last time i posted something was hmmm 1 1/2 year ago a few days before my college graduation and
the time i posted during that time i got bombarded with constructive critism, which helped me grow, i do hope i get another one of these again XD maybe for most people they may find it hurt full but for me what does'nt kill you makes u stronger and one of the best ways to learn is to learn from the industries best of the best ^_^
well wasnt able to post much cg society cause things got busy but i've got time again ^_^
i think the last time i posted cant remember all of the suggestions but one of them
was avoid using the dodge and burn tool hmmmm composition and adjust my lighting
hmm cant remember the rest it was a long time a ago
anyways i want to ask your opinion on one of my latest works
things i am looking for:
What can be improved or things you don't like about it?
What are the things u like about it?
In under what can be improved, suggested reference material to use?
http://roninfang.deviantart.com/art/Ceres-Strafefields-Beach-140125373
i did this work roughly 2 months before i was being trained by a certain small game pre-production studio here in the philippines
http://roninfang.deviantart.com/art/Into-the-Abbyss-145897928
this one i did after roughly 2 months of training in the game pre production studio
i did this to see if i improved after training within a few months in the studio
my friends think i have improved a lot after training from the studio but i want to hear
feedback opinions of the true masters of the industry.
and again pls keep this in mind when giving feed back pls ^_^
What can be improved or things u don't like about it?
What are the things u like about it?
In under what can be improved, suggested reference material to use?
as for why is it brown the color well i still don't know what color scheme to give this character so i kept it monochromatic for the moment until i find a nice color scheming that would work for this character design.
the time i posted during that time i got bombarded with constructive critism, which helped me grow, i do hope i get another one of these again XD maybe for most people they may find it hurt full but for me what does'nt kill you makes u stronger and one of the best ways to learn is to learn from the industries best of the best ^_^
well wasnt able to post much cg society cause things got busy but i've got time again ^_^
i think the last time i posted cant remember all of the suggestions but one of them
was avoid using the dodge and burn tool hmmmm composition and adjust my lighting
hmm cant remember the rest it was a long time a ago
anyways i want to ask your opinion on one of my latest works
things i am looking for:
What can be improved or things you don't like about it?
What are the things u like about it?
In under what can be improved, suggested reference material to use?
http://roninfang.deviantart.com/art/Ceres-Strafefields-Beach-140125373
i did this work roughly 2 months before i was being trained by a certain small game pre-production studio here in the philippines
http://roninfang.deviantart.com/art/Into-the-Abbyss-145897928
this one i did after roughly 2 months of training in the game pre production studio
i did this to see if i improved after training within a few months in the studio
my friends think i have improved a lot after training from the studio but i want to hear
feedback opinions of the true masters of the industry.
and again pls keep this in mind when giving feed back pls ^_^
What can be improved or things u don't like about it?
What are the things u like about it?
In under what can be improved, suggested reference material to use?
as for why is it brown the color well i still don't know what color scheme to give this character so i kept it monochromatic for the moment until i find a nice color scheming that would work for this character design.