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Nerv
08-26-2003, 02:36 AM
I'll be moving my computer to a place where no internet connection was provided. So I'm trying to finish this concept scene within 3 days. Wish me luck!

Comments are needed to improve!
http://www.getcybered.com/sites/nervever/data/home/Work%20shop%2000.jpg

Nerv
08-26-2003, 10:33 AM
Update....
http://www.getcybered.com/sites/nervever/data/home/Work%20shop%2001.jpg

brandish
08-26-2003, 10:47 AM
hey wait, were are the bumps on his
head now?;) anxious to see the finished picture!
you're not gonna keep the line drawing,
i suppose?

Nerv
08-26-2003, 11:00 AM
I see...... I'll add those bumps right after I finish it.
You're rite... I'll not keeping the lines...but maybe some will be kept.. depends.

http://www.getcybered.com/sites/nervever/data/home/Work%20shop%2002.jpg

masterbird
08-26-2003, 05:05 PM
hei..1 thing to ask...wat is tat boy looking at????
n wat he doing...the psot tat pulling a wire isit not surpose to be like this???try to act the pose b4 u draw...
maybe u will find some pose tat more nature...
also can see some prespective problems here...
the color still cant give an6y coments coz not yet fin...
now looks a litle messy...n the paip tat hang on the wall is fake...
give some texture to help make them relistic..although is not important..u can make it blur after u got the details on it..
anyway keep it up..
hope this piece can be better then ur previous 1...

FallenArchangel
08-26-2003, 06:00 PM
:rolleyes: Study colour mood more... kind of dull. And the small duddy with goggle must look what he is doing. Give a story. Like i dont know what that fela doing. And that machine that boy its some kind of flooting. Make logic abit. Control ur outline use artline or bero if can. I see to much line. Make it neeter.:D

Keep it up man. Say u Is To Improve U>>>>> Chow

brandish
08-26-2003, 06:04 PM
seems to me the guys not looking where he's supposed to,
because the girl said something
nice to him ?

Nerv
08-27-2003, 03:45 AM
I can't stop laughing...hahah :scream: You two (malaysian) seems like digging out every flaw that exist in this work. Too bad my computer was unplugged today and i can't do and post any update.



Brandish : Looks like I have to put on a hologram screen front of the boy first as i plan to do it at the final touch up or else his eye sight bugging every one.


masterbird : youre' rite with the sight of the boy, he's havin problem right now. Posing? I don't see any... ?? Hey, this is just a wip, realistic or not also want to kacau!! you ar..... -_-||


fallenarchangle :
Study colour mood more... kind of dull
..............

And the small duddy with goggle must look what he is doing.
I've answer this.



Give a story. Like i dont know what that fela doing
I think that's only you......who don't know.

And that machine that boy its some kind of flooting. Make logic abit.
........-_- your comments really making me sick....

Control ur outline use artline or bero if can. I see to much line. Make it neeter.
Looks like you're just simply throw out some junk here... Please read previous post, I've answer this line stuff long ago.

FallenArchangel
08-27-2003, 03:58 PM
:rolleyes: Hup....I just give you some coment to your work.. U seems to b dont like been Critik.. For what you post out seens that u hate to b critik.. No harm is it.. At least you try your best to do a better update... I have seen most off your work. Some seems to b very interesting. Is it u oredi tooo confident that your work tooo outstanding?? So every 1 have to prase you alot is it?
Tell u the truth I personally not that good also and i rate myself 2/5. So ask yourself. So dont be too upset ok. Then show me all you got for your next update.:wise:

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