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pyschopath
05-20-2002, 07:49 AM
I am 14 :shrug:

hi guys.It is a new work:beer:

Galo
05-20-2002, 08:32 AM
Erm...... pffff...... don't know what to say, don't get me wrong but you need a lot of training....

-Galo

jan_muentinga
05-20-2002, 02:04 PM
i think that was not very motivating!
i really like it, outstanding work for a 14yo.
you really achieved the look you were after.
try to texture it, to develop it further.
keep it up

Galo
05-20-2002, 03:15 PM
yeah okay i didn't mean it that way.... i like it to.... for an 14 year old.....but he just needs some more training to develop his skillz

Joel Hooks
05-20-2002, 04:06 PM
Originally posted by Galo
but he just needs some more training to develop his skillz

So do you. So does most everyone.

Anyway. I think the scene could use some better lighting to add more drama. It's looking pretty good, but think of it like a movie set and set up lights accordingly.

(you mispelled "gallery" on your website. just fyi)

Project813
05-20-2002, 05:13 PM
Yeah, seriously, give the kid break, he's 14 and he doesnt need someone killing his ambition by making stupid remarks....
:rolleyes:

Good work kid, keep it up!

lricho
05-21-2002, 08:04 AM
I like the prof - looks like he is quite a character :scream:
in regards to the lighting - you have quite a few light sources in the scene that aren't acually casting light (e.g. the window, the lamp).
You also have a lot of hard edges on your models which could do with some small bevels on the edges, to catch the light, which will add a bit more definition to your models and make them look a bit more real (it wont get you the whole way there tho)

pyschopath
05-22-2002, 07:24 PM
I have too happy:wavey:
thanks all guys

spunkman
05-23-2002, 02:44 PM
:) haha^^^^^^





:p







good!endeavor!

pyschopath
05-23-2002, 08:51 PM
a new render :shrug:

Azure
05-23-2002, 09:38 PM
Rock on little man. Way to get your hands wet and start early. I wish i would have even known what a computer was when i was 14. I would recomend you key your eye in on how things look and act around you. Keep up the work and u will get beter, just takes time and practice.

~A~

Joel Hooks
05-23-2002, 11:50 PM
The lighting is looking better, that is a good start for the ambient levels. Now cosider "turning on" that little lamps, and maybe adding some sort of overhead light. Right now it looks like illumination from the glazed windows, but the guy would have trouble seeing without some sort of indoor lighting!

pyschopath
05-25-2002, 10:32 AM
:scream: I am very glad :scream:

i'll take care of what you said to me

JoBbE
05-25-2002, 11:10 AM
pretty good start!
keep it up

pyschopath
05-25-2002, 03:19 PM
thaks JoBbE:thumbsup:

xynaria
05-26-2002, 12:35 AM
I like the character a lot but I would take the time to make the hands bigger. Lets see where you go with this and great to see you posting your work here. :)

pyschopath
05-26-2002, 06:32 AM
thanks xynaria
you can be sure that i will keep this way up...:thumbsup:

Sevarf2
05-26-2002, 10:11 PM
Try to texturing and lighting up the scene, good start! What software?

pyschopath
05-27-2002, 04:41 AM
thanks Sevarf2 :thumbsup:
i am using Lightwave 7.5

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