View Full Version : WIP: v i s i o n c&c pls
kunkka 08-25-2003, 04:00 AM i was arrowed to do a visioning poster for my battalion
in the army
my unit's logo is a spartan n our color is purple
done wif painter6 over 2 days, on n off
(lineart not included)
i need c&c pls~
i havent finished it, lacking some details n highlights
n more contrasts
but rite now it feels weird..
is the lineart for the soldiers distracting?
crits r greatly appreciated~!!:D
http://sganime.com/uploads/post-3-1061738018.jpg
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melmann
08-25-2003, 10:51 PM
I think its awesome so far! Ive got no crits and cant wait to see how it turns out:beer:
kunkka
08-26-2003, 01:55 PM
thanx man
is the pic too cluttered with no focal point?
goetterfunke
08-26-2003, 02:58 PM
nice work i just had an idea for the shield
heres what i did in 3 minutes just to show what i mean
http://www.planetbattlefield.com/eod/kunkka.jpg
kunkka
08-26-2003, 04:59 PM
WOW...
cam u tell me wat u did to make everything else so dark?
:cool:
goetterfunke
08-26-2003, 05:30 PM
i used photoshop contrast, levels and saturation tweaking
also burn tool for the mountains and fire, and dodge tool for the light rays
however burn and dodge tools mess up the colours as you see so better invest some time paint them i'd say :)
Theta-Dot
08-31-2003, 05:57 AM
ok i don't like that shiny light from the 2nd picture there... I like the old one better. And the soldier in the front looks like he's about to trip and fall to me.. I'd like to see the flag raised higher than his gun, perhaps it's too late for that kind of change though.
good luck
albinochicken
08-31-2003, 06:00 AM
I personally would like to see a version that is half the old, half the new. I like the shininess, but it's a bit too much in the second. toning it down a bit will give a great contrast to the image. 8-)
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