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sparkysavar
01-01-2010, 09:50 PM
http://vimeo.com/8485903

A short film that took me about 2.5 years to complete. My senior thesis from college that decided to take another year outside of school to get finished, thanks to senioritis and getting a job!

I'd love feedback, and I hope everyone enjoys this!

fleety
01-02-2010, 12:00 PM
Hey,

Pretty solid story and some cool ideas for the characters. Don't take this the wrong way, but I think it's perhaps too long, there are some shots that could be less than half the length. I can understand why you haven't took to slicing chunks out of it as it took so long to make, but that's just my opinion right?
:shrug:

sparkysavar
01-02-2010, 05:17 PM
Hey,

Pretty solid story and some cool ideas for the characters. Don't take this the wrong way, but I think it's perhaps too long, there are some shots that could be less than half the length. I can understand why you haven't took to slicing chunks out of it as it took so long to make, but that's just my opinion right?
:shrug:

No offense taken! I actually agree. During some parts it was really hard to figure out how to balance the pieces length with the music, good lessons to take for next time. :)

sparkysavar
01-03-2010, 09:33 PM
Fun screenshots I thought I'd share!

http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f136/sparkysavar/MovieClipping9.jpg
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f136/sparkysavar/MovieClipping8.jpg
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f136/sparkysavar/MovieClipping7.jpg
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f136/sparkysavar/MovieClipping5.jpg
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f136/sparkysavar/MovieClipping3.jpg
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f136/sparkysavar/MovieClipping2.jpg
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f136/sparkysavar/MovieClipping1.jpg

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