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Kosala
08-24-2003, 08:51 AM
Greetings all,

Here is a piece that I am working on that is nearing completion. To get some outside perspective I thought I would post it here and here some of your comments.

I an not at all sensitive to constructive critique so let it rip! ;)

The Contemplative Warrior (http://www.silven.com/temp/The_Contemplative_Warrior2.jpg)
melmann
08-25-2003, 10:42 PM
colors look good . I think the only thing that looks weird to me is the arm holdin the staff thing. I think the sleeve isnt curving enough to give the right perspective. Hope that makes sense.. I'll be on the lookout for updates. :)
Peece,
Mel
goetterfunke
08-26-2003, 05:38 PM
very nice,
only things i dont like are the background and floor bricks, as well as the shield colors
Kosala
08-27-2003, 12:00 PM
Here's an update..what do you think?

http://www.silven.com/temp/TheContemplativeWarrior3.jpg
goetterfunke
08-27-2003, 01:34 PM
really cool now,
theres one little logic issue i noticed:
the light looks very cold, as on a winter day but the soldiers clothes are too short for winter time

maybe make a warmer sunlight and reflections, as the golden sun in that pic
otherwise its perfect

http://www.worldtour-of-scotland.com/tour/images-tour/0307-stjohns.jpg
Kosala
08-28-2003, 07:24 AM
cool, thanks for the feedback guys. I will have aother one up soon for critique.
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