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ElementalMist
12-17-2009, 03:12 AM
This is a character of my own design that I am creating in Maya and would like some feedback on. I want to know what people think about how everything is looking currently and advice on things that could be better. This model is being done as a class project right now, but I want to make it a portfolio piece.

Thank you ^_^

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v307/Ryaika/KitSide.jpghttp://img.photobucket.com/albums/v307/Ryaika/KitBackClose.jpghttp://img.photobucket.com/albums/v307/Ryaika/KitFrontClose.jpghttp://img.photobucket.com/albums/v307/Ryaika/KitFront.jpg

gsokol
12-17-2009, 02:49 PM
Your eyes are a little funky looking...too round.


Its hard to critique your model right now, since there is no wireframes. Also, smooth those edges.

ElementalMist
12-17-2009, 11:21 PM
Here is a few shots with the mesh highlighted.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v307/Ryaika/Kit%20in%20progress/SideMesh.jpghttp://img.photobucket.com/albums/v307/Ryaika/Kit%20in%20progress/KitBackMesh.jpghttp://img.photobucket.com/albums/v307/Ryaika/Kit%20in%20progress/FrontMesh.jpg

ViolentMaid
12-18-2009, 12:05 AM
You might want to set up a better scene with some lighting and planes so we have a better idea of the model.

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