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seethemd 05-19-2002, 03:49 AM let me know what you think!
(made with 3dsmax4, rendered with brazil)
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Taoizm
05-19-2002, 04:06 AM
It's a really great looking pic. :thumbsup:
My biggest nitpick crit is with his pose. I can't decide if he's holding his head up with his hand, or if the hand is up there for expression. If he is resting his head the body posture doesn't support the pose. He needs to be more slumped over, and convey more sense of weight.
Tim Deneau
05-19-2002, 08:15 AM
I think the hand looks a little too feminine. It should be larger, and more rough so it better matches the surface of the face. Also, like Taoizm suggested, it would help to pose him more slumped over.
Great job :)
Tottebias
05-19-2002, 09:05 AM
Really nice! Agrre with the hand though..Make it larger and more maskuline.
hypercube
05-19-2002, 09:26 AM
Very very nice. The head is great.
Will second and third the hand notions though, with the size difference and pose, it seems very far across the body, it's very easy to see it as someone else's hand and arm entirely.
Other than that, it's fab. Something seems odd with the coat either surfacing or physically, but can't put my finger on it. The shirt and other bits have a really good feel.
dmcgrath
05-20-2002, 01:33 AM
It's also the painted fingernails. Thats what got my attention first. The picture would be just as powerful without the hand. Think about it.
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