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xzevlin
05-19-2002, 03:01 AM
Here's some pages from a Batman story I'm doing. Well, it isn't really Batman, cause I still didn't finish modeling his costume, so I think it's an Elseworlds story about Bruce Wayne forgetting his costume at home.

This was the first page I did, I didn't have my post-render technique worked out yet, so it's a little different style from page 2

http://www.xzevlin.com/gallery/brucePage01.jpg

And here's a page I just finished that I'm purdy happy with.

http://www.xzevlin.com/gallery/fightPage01a.jpg
Taoizm
05-19-2002, 04:09 AM
Elvis, I've been a fan of your comic stuff for awhile now. I can't wait to see this fleshed out. :)

Like you mentioned there is a huge difference between pg1 and pg2. I like the style you're getting on pg2, and hope to see more.
Flaviosen
05-19-2002, 08:16 AM
the only thing that i find missing here is movement....otherwise its cool :)

heres a link to show u what i mean...
fighting with movement (http://polykarbon.com/tutorials/fighting/fight.htm)
xzevlin
05-20-2002, 11:16 AM
Thanks guys! I'm not sure how many pages I'll do, since DC doesn't take submissions anymore, I might either start building some Marvel characters and do something with the Avengers or just start on my own 8 page mini comic that I can beg people to take from my table at conventions.

That link was really handy, Flaviosen, I picked up some ideas from it. I posted on a comic art board, and my poses on the fight page really got ripped into, so I redid the whole thing from scratch.


http://www.xzevlin.com/gallery/fightPage02a.jpg
Flaviosen
05-20-2002, 11:30 AM
now that was a whole lot better....luv it...now one can feel the heavy smacks...good work :airguitar
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