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DreiGrasheir
08-20-2003, 08:45 PM
Here's a scene i made a while ago. C&C please.

kyle_tdr
08-20-2003, 09:01 PM
Nice work, i love the lighting, what about one of the windows being broken with some clean light shining through the broken part.

otacon
08-20-2003, 09:16 PM
Pretty good, but some things look off scale. I would like to see a view of the whole park! :)

DreiGrasheir
08-20-2003, 11:15 PM
heh... there is no 'whole park'. it was meant for nothing more than a still scene. Bulid only what you see and all. Athough I actually did build quite a lot of geometry i ended up deleating later on for optimization. BTW, what would you say is off scale?

flewp
08-22-2003, 04:29 PM
Doesn't seem really all that convincing. As noted, the scale seems a bit off. Especially the rail in the center of the image. And the door. Also, there should be plenty of stickers placed all over as well as more banners and whatnot. The floor texture also seems off to me.

ChaseJase
08-22-2003, 05:11 PM
I dont like it, every thing is to uniform, there needs to be alot more chaos.

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