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Night
08-19-2003, 03:29 PM
When I began this drawing, I did not know what to draw, I realized that the guy look like me, I have decided to continue in this direction, then the girl in fact has a friend of me (I see her not long times ago after some year dont see her)


Said me if you like!
**sorry for my english

http://membres.lycos.fr/thenight4ever/jxpress.jpg

close-up
http://membres.lycos.fr/thenight4ever/jxpress2.jpg

Done in photoshop, with wacom intuos2 in 1 1/2 week
Night
08-20-2003, 02:57 AM
163 view, no reply!?

is so bad?
xolvierx
08-20-2003, 03:04 AM
Ce nest pas mauvais! Japprecie beaucoup, Je ne ferai pas meilleur mais je peut essayer de te donner mon point de vue, je trouve que tu devrai mettre un peu plus de Outlines!

Continu ton bon travail, Jaime beaucoup
slime
08-20-2003, 07:08 AM
It's a bad illustration.
I'm going to give a hard critique. Hope you don't mind.

The style is so typical. "Western person try to copy manga style" :) The proportions are wrong. IE the head of the girl is too little. The hands are hidden, only a few fingers show, the poses are forced, the color has too much contrast, the wrinkles are random, the shadows are off, and finally the background distracts all the atention and breaks the (weak) composition.

My advice is that you should try to draw without focusing in the details. Draw a lot, copy a lot, real life and printed art, and then begin with your completely original work.

Good luck! :thumbsup:
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