WIP - Weight Lift - Critique Please

[SerevaSix]

I've updated it, I now turned the curves into spline, working on my ease in's and ease out's and that kinda stuff. I've made a lot changes too. Here's the updated lift:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=W7oZXlGeAaQ

It would really be a lot of help if you guys could give some insight into my work. Thanks~

[SerevaSix]

Here's the near-final version of my Weight Lift. I'm still revising parts of it to make it better.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eXQtaAba6qQ

Please reply, getting critiques from public forums is part of the assignment. Thanks~

[Freebirth]

A few observations from your latest version (just the lift part):

- When he goes to roll the box over, have him use more of his body. Lean until it stretches out his right arm to a straight position. Then slowly pull it over, bending the arm.

- It looks a little light when he pulls it up onto its corner. Again stretch out that arm a little more and put more body lean into it.

- The actual pick up looks pretty good, though I'd start it out slower, only giving that last oomph as it gets close to knee level.

Good work, it's looking good.

[SerevaSix]

Thanks so much! I appreciate the feedback. So I have to put more weight on the pull up... and extend the arm out. And slower on the actual lifting... so it eases out from after he first lifts it up, right?

I'll work on those revisions and see how it turns out. :D Thanks.

[Ayro]

I like it, but when he picks it up, it seems like the box suddenly loses it's weight.

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