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Kion
08-19-2003, 08:34 AM
This is a recent 10 sec dialogue test i finished, tell me what you think?


download here
http://www.fatnek.com/video/dir.mov


thanks guys

Kion:buttrock:

lala7
08-19-2003, 01:53 PM
:shrug: :buttrock: yes thats the stuff...
nice details in the movement ..
lol ... i like your little man .. whats his name ?

Stephen Vyas
08-19-2003, 03:24 PM
I liked this animation, but there's a few pops that could use smoothing out(eg. The first time he puts his elbow up on the back of the chair and then when he's starting to talk about Pinky and the Brain) Also, the bottom of his torso moves quite a bit, which ruins the illusion that he's sitting down.

FloydBishop
08-19-2003, 06:52 PM
Some of the mouth shapes don't work well enough yet.

The first "wuhh" sound, where he says "it was a thing" has a mouth shape that is much too wide. You need the "wuh" to read better here.

The hands seem a little stiff. Maybe do something more with the fingers?

You're on the right track...

Kion
08-21-2003, 01:05 AM
Thanks guys for the advice! Don't have a name for him yet a friend suggested "Tiny" i don't know if you have one let me know


Kion

mehdianim
08-21-2003, 11:23 AM
I like it. Especially the head movement on the "certainly had the thing.." is very convincing. My only gripe is that his hands move a little too much sometimes for any attitude to register. Try puting less but well calculated poses.
The end works really well too.

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