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strogoff
08-18-2003, 07:50 PM
http://www.silberkugel.de/img/ganymed_websize.jpg


Hello there, this is some older stuff, one of my first pieces ever.
The monochromatic mood was intended. This one is ought to be part of some sort of comicbook, which will eventually be done in the far future.

Ah ja, made with C4D, color correction in PS.

I will be glad by receiving any comments.

jlelievre
08-18-2003, 08:02 PM
hi strogoff;

I think this is a great piece! Lots of attention to detail in the modeling process. I think you could make this into a kickass piece if you were to put some textures into the scene. Right now it seems bland becuase eveything is the same colour. Even slight variations in the colour would help give it some atmosphere. Also there is something about the shadows. I'm not sure how lighting works in C4D but it appears that there are slight gaps between the objects and the shadows they cast. I don't know if this is fixable but it was just something that came to my attention. :)

strogoff
08-18-2003, 08:14 PM
Thanks Intrinsia,

thought about textures and put some simple ones on it, but the result was that the clean appearance of the corridor got lost. Don`t know how to fix this without distracting from the only coloured area, the blood. So i decided to leave it as it was.

jlelievre
08-18-2003, 08:21 PM
What about making the white texture you're using something like reflective plastic? This would maybe give the scene more depth while maintaining the sterility of it all.

strogoff
08-20-2003, 10:05 AM
Hmm, i`ll try it that way. But my old Athlon will cry out in pain.

Thank you

Thekkur
08-20-2003, 10:50 AM
hahah, I can't help it, but it occurs very funny to me... :applause:
I don't know exactly why, but it gives me some sort of "Farside" feeling.

I hope you don't find this offending. Technically it looks very good to me.

strogoff
09-17-2004, 01:02 PM
hm? i`ll see what i can do.

DarthAltar
09-18-2004, 01:12 AM
I think it looks great, good job and I like the comic book idea :thumbsup:


I dunno even where to begin to start on how to make this stuff. *looks up tuts on google*

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