DragonSlayer

[Beechdbum]

i think it feels empty, well at least for me cause my eye follows the sword up into that blank area, and well theres nothing there, cant really tell you how to fix it im having my own problems with the same probem right now.

[FabioMSilva]

add some shining & highlights to the slayer armor. That should bring some spectacularity to the scene. Also make the flames emit some sorth of glow overr the chaacters. IT seems like if the flmaes arent even there.

[Ryoma]

lo neon :)
i think the lighting of this scenery is a bit strange tho...there are some white parts in the picture, but the scene is luminated through the fires....fire gives a kind of red or yellowish light. try to bring this fire into the glowing , highlighted parts of the armor and the dragon.
u could also try some strong shadows...perhaps it gives the scene some more dramatic.

go on with than one, it looks good sofar. :)

[neon11]

thx guys for the pointers. anyways i made a quick change. I didn't add more reflections on slayer's armor yet. All i did was juss bring out the flames a little more. I think it looks better now. I'm gonna start with other details later. I still think i need to do something on the top of the picture. The thing is, i'm using a mouse and it is hurting my wrist way too much, so i'm gonna hold off on this for a while.
but still plz keep coming with ideas on how to make my work better. I'm going to finish it someday.
http://www.myimgs.com/data/drowkab/dragonslayerunfinishedsamplechg.jpg

[jaucifer]

its coming along just great, love the fire but the armour should look more worn out with some part being chip off like your sword.

[neon11]

Well i guess this is my final. I got tired of working on this.
http://www.myimgs.com/data/drowkab/dragonslayerfinal640.jpg
Thx for all your comments. You guys think this looks finished?

[Beechdbum]

well right now its a very nice red x

[jerbille]

GREAT JOB DUDE !!!!! I like your style :D

[poisonspider]

very nice

[Balboa]

eh, the smoke from the sword, man... i don't know :hmm:

[Windex]

is it me or does the dragon need more light reflected on its head?

[ZVAN]

everything is fine if u juz wanna achieve this lvl of details.. but try making some part of the total black part brighter.. or add some orange to it.. if the armor of the character is metallic.. it'll reflect.. orange light from the fires.. as in composition wise.. maybe u could make the dragon head higher and bigger.. to make it look more dominant that the fella.. :scream: good luck!

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