Demo reel wip

[EdwardMcEvenue]

Cool, I like how you interlaced the footage to create more interest. Only critique I can think of is to get rid of the viewlines coming out of the scientists eyes, its a bit distracting. I was also confused at the spider with changing lights, I didnt quite get the story on that..other than that it was enjoyable. Keep it up!

[Neon67]

hi man , thanks for your crits

well for the highline i dont know how to hide it
it comes from the constrain look at

for the spider changing color its for showing his emotion in a way , you might need to see the full short to get a better view on it

[Neon67]

New version http://vimeo.com/7479271

Please critis me :)

For comparaison , the first demo reel was this one http://vimeo.com/6914714

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