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linzi
08-16-2003, 04:13 PM
Been a while since this was up here but the feedback I got last time has pushed me to make fixes and see if I can up the overall quality of the pic. More input is very welcome especially if it helps me sort out any mistakes. I've been working at a much higher resolution with very few layers which has made it much easier to work on and see where things were going wrong. I think I've improved the background, made her neck less stiff and worked out some of the problems with the foreshortening but if you guys see anything else that could be improved I'll be glad to go back and tweak it.

http://homepage.ntlworld.com/irene.mcgough/images/temp/After_Summer2.jpg

After and before:

http://homepage.ntlworld.com/irene.mcgough/images/temp/a_summ_diff.jpg
USSR2003
08-16-2003, 04:27 PM
i rly like the detail on it but the face sorta stands out, i dont know its a little less 'rough' then the rest of the picture im debating with myself if thats good or bad tho so overall thats and amazing picture :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:
schmu_20mol
08-16-2003, 09:12 PM
i'd suggest to make those bugs in the upper left less comic like so they'll fit better to the style of the rest of the pic....another thing that bugs me is that in the current version of the pic that mushroom looks a bit out of balance (before he didn't fit the bg but looked balanced)....


but hey it's a really good point you've taken that picture at
Nerv
08-17-2003, 08:22 AM
Looks simmillar to my pics. LOL :applause:

Link to my thread. (http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?threadid=76693)

It's looks cool, this is my personal felling... I feel that the character looks dirty specially on her skirt... perhaps use more fresh and bright colour on it would be better. :)
jaucifer
08-18-2003, 07:13 AM
wow, its very nicely done.
linzi
08-20-2003, 12:13 AM
Hey guys, thanks for the replies. I'm going to go back to the pic and see if I can work on some of your points and a couple of things that I've seen that bug me.

USSR2003 - I wanted the face to be smooth but I hope it isn't too out of keeping with the rest of the pic.

schmu_20mol - I'm not sure how I would change the bugs... maybe add I should add some detail to the antenae? I think the lighting on the mushroom is a little off so I'll sort that out.

Nerv - hmmm... Dirty clothes isn't quite what I was going for. I wanted her clothes to look like they came from the environment that's she is in but maybe they're a little desaturated.

jaucifer - :thumbsup: Thanks, always good to hear.
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