WIP blocking pass: Please Critique

[EdwardMcEvenue]

Your animation looks really good! My only critique is that from 1 - 9 seconds your character presents a more smug/arrogant attitude (high chin, playing with nails, etc.) and from 10 - 28 seconds he becomes more layed back, and caring in his actions. So you present two different personalities/emotions. It may be what your after. I don't know the back story. Overall its great, your ready for the 2nd pass.

[robcat2075]

My crit would be that the clip doesn't present much opportunity for change.

I'd suggest finding a clip that presents a reason to show some change in his demeanor. Something you can really show.

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