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Kinten

08-15-2003, 11:32 PM

Another WIP..

So far nothing interesting with the rendering, just need c&c concerning the anatomy.

Educational paintovers are more than welcome!

http://www.kinten.net/portfolio/wip/woman.jpg http://www.kinten.net/portfolio/wip/woman2.jpg

dinfet

08-17-2003, 03:19 AM

I llike her face, the only thing that bothers me at this point is her neck seems to be a little long, fix that and it will look more correct.

schmu_20mol

08-17-2003, 01:51 PM

i think you should form out her right breast some more - for now she looks kinda flat on this side

mora

08-17-2003, 05:09 PM

she looks kinda flat this side cuz the shirt is hanging down her side so it does'nt show much form imo.I dont think it needs tweaking since its a weird art piece (if thats what it was intended to be:surprised )

hanhui

08-17-2003, 06:07 PM

Hands have structure questions ,The neck is too long .

Kinten

08-18-2003, 01:15 PM

Thanks for the replies.
Im busy working with another project atm, but Ill update asap.

Hands, neck and breast :)

Ive got an idea of where this piece is going, but if youve got suggestion on the rendering part, feel free to post them here.

3thumbs

08-18-2003, 05:10 PM

thought i might comment anyway.
the left of the next is too straight i think, her breasts should be higher she looks like shez 80 or somehting:drool: lol:P
and turn her hand a little to the left
but appart from that its a great piccie

Bliz

08-18-2003, 09:34 PM

Originally posted by 3thumbs
her breasts should be higher she looks like shez 80 or somehting:drool: lol:P

I think the breasts are at the correct height. A lot of artist make the mistake of putting the breasts too high up the chest but Kinten has them just above the height of the inside of the elbow which falls right in the middle of normal tolerances. (Go on have a look at real life reference!)

The long neck is the main anatomy problem I see. If the back of the head was a lot lower than the front of the head so that she was looking up then the neck length would probably work. The easiest way to think of correct neck neck length is that there are normall four vertebrae going from the middle of the shoulders to the base of the skull. If you can visuallise a correctly proportioned vertebrae then your halfway there.

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