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JasonHall
10-30-2009, 01:29 AM
Hey everyone! I just finished an animation and would love to hear some critiques on it. I'm working on some other animations at the moment, so I'm going to let this one sit for a few days and then revisit it.


Sneak v2 (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KXo3LLtUwQ0)
Sneak v1 (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pmRVchUMeBM)

Hammer Slam / Heavy Weight (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=h2wnCHqEQTM)

Run Cycle (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-nG0_00GDJU)

Thanks!
-Jason

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*EDIT* I've added two new animations. A run cycle and an animation showing the character using a very heavy hammer. Since these are the same character, I'll just put the animations in this thread.
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Wilson-3d
10-30-2009, 06:00 AM
Hi Jason. You have a lot of good stuff here. One thing I wanted to mention, especially in the first two key poses, was that everything seems to be hitting the pose at the same time. Work on getting those hips hitting followed by the torso up up the arms. Perhaps in that second pose that hits around frame 41. Have the hips start out and then the leg go up for the step. You could even have the arms landing into position as late as 54 or so. So you have those key poses set up that you start out with but then you get in and out of them so they are more hidden. Hope that helps some!
JasonHall
11-03-2009, 04:31 PM
Thanks Chris! That does help. I hadn't been paying as much attention to those first two poses as I should have. I completely reworked the end of the animation and made some minor tweaks to the beginning. Offsetting the back and arms, etc.

I also added two new animations. :D

Any critiques are welcome.

-Jason
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