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Crash0283
10-28-2009, 03:23 PM
Here's a new animation I just put together for a class of mine. Any feedback much apprecitated. Thanks.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WPkqNblCzoc
dren
10-28-2009, 05:36 PM
Haha, pretty funny story. Seems like something that would happen to me! One thing to keep in mind is you don't want any dead characters. Keep them moving a little. Once they go frozen, they don't feel real anymore. For example, the crow could land on the scarecrow's arm, and sort of sway back and forth just a little bit to keep the movement alive. I really like your pumpkin model too! A great concept and production for a project near halloween! Good job :)
JayHandle
10-28-2009, 10:34 PM
be sure to keep in mind how crows moves. From the looks of it you had an idea but it looked as tho the crow was being controlled by strings, like a puppet. My suggestion to you is to try and find videos of how birds move, land, take flight, etc. Nice video by the way!
Crash0283
10-29-2009, 05:08 AM
Thanks for the feedback you guys. Im still working on it of course, but I agree I need to work on the crows movement and dead space where it needs it. Thanks again.
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