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amiteshnandan
10-21-2009, 10:13 PM
I would like you to have look at our short film

"Education Bazaar"

Education Bazaar, A short film by DAFM-9

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=n7eyqZdRTsk

Zica Studios, mumbai, India


Our short film Education Bazaar, nominated for 4th China (Beijing) International Student Animation Festival. http://www.cgtantra.com/forums/images/smilies/clap.gifhttp://www.cgtantra.com/forums/images/smilies/clap.gifhttp://www.cgtantra.com/forums/images/smilies/clap.gif

New Animation Showreel
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Michael5188
10-21-2009, 10:24 PM
Hello! Well first of all congrats on the nomination. The short was quite an undertaking so it must feel great to finish.

As far as my opinion, I wasn't very entertained, felt the story was a bit weak and random. I also felt having a bunch of free rigs thrown together made each character feel out of place and broke up any style the short could have had. I thought the animation was jerky, and rough throughout. There were some great moments, but the arcs and overlapping actions all need to be cleaned up, and a lot of the timing tweaked. There are a lot of pops and random movements that just didn't look right. I understand with a short of this scale you have time constraints, and I'm sure you would have liked to spend more time on it.

Anyways, I think in a situation like this quality matters more than quantity, and it might have been a good idea to edit down your idea, or come up with something a little less demanding.

Again though, congrats on finishing, and I do want to stress this is my opinion.

amiteshnandan
11-10-2009, 07:44 PM
Thank's Micheal for your valuable comments.

Vinera
11-11-2009, 06:33 AM
Very cool and amasing....

I would like you to have look at our short film

"Education Bazaar"

Education Bazaar, A short film by DAFM-9

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=n7eyqZdRTsk

Zica Studios, mumbai, India


Our short film Education Bazaar, nominated for 4th China (Beijing) International Student Animation Festival. http://www.cgtantra.com/forums/images/smilies/clap.gifhttp://www.cgtantra.com/forums/images/smilies/clap.gifhttp://www.cgtantra.com/forums/images/smilies/clap.gif

New Animation Showreel
------------------------

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aLIpQMqt2dM http://www.cgtantra.com/forums/images/smilies/wink.gifhttp://www.cgtantra.com/forums/images/smilies/wink.gifhttp://www.cgtantra.com/forums/images/smilies/wink.gif

Vinera
11-11-2009, 06:37 AM
Very cool..

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